I like that Tim made sure Sean knows he can talk to him, even about his love-life. Pretty much telling Sean he really does accept him for who he is. I believe they are better off friends. No offense to Tim, but he chews women up and spits them out! When it comes to Tim, Sean is to vulnerable. If things went sour he'd never recover.
Did Mr. Tobias use his lawyer skills to find Sean's house or he must have followed him at some point. It's great how they both just sort of give in to each other... both thinking they're controlling the situation at all times, when neither see where this is going. I think Toby is falling for Sean and he's not ready to accept that. It's like part of him wants Keller. He'll always love Keller. The other half of him knows it's time to move on. His relationship with Keller is not going to work with Chris never getting out. Part of him likes Sean for who he is and I think Toby likes the stability of Sean. He's not unpredictable like Chris. That's what Toby needs right now, someone with his life straight. Another part compares the 2 men. He should maybe not talk to Sean about the comparisons, but it's ok to notice! Usually I'm not interested in anything fisting, but the image of Keller stretching Toby to the limits... Toby trying to contain screams of ecstasy... god that's hot!
Then we have Sean, pushing away, at first, any tenderness Toby tries to show, and eventually giving in and loving it. It's sad, Sean thinking he can only have that wonderful, loving, caring tenderness for a short time. He deserves it and I'm pretty sure by the end of this story he will have it, but I'll have to wait and see. It's hot how Sean totally gets off watching Keller all the time, knowing exactly what Toby can do for a man.
As neither of them put up a real fight, I think a part of them knows they are good together and they do care about each other. I loved this part, it's amazing. The whole story is awesome!! I get soooo excited when I see another part posted. I really needed this today, too. Something enjoyable. Thanks!
I think Tim could be a really good friend like that. He may be self-absorbed and tantrumy, but he really does care and want to do right by people. I think that would work better with with friends who aren't prone to screwing up than it does with prisoners who are.
I used to be a really hands-off writer, who left a lot of room for readers to figure out character motives and such, but over the years I've shifted to really trying to capture specifics. This story was kind of an attempt to step back and leave it ambiguous again, hoping people would read the characters in their own way, so I love so much that you've told me how you see them. I could natter on at length in response, but some of this is in where the story goes from here.
Sean definitely deserves some love and tenderness.
Thank you! I'm so happy you're enjoying it! We're all in need of some happy escapism at the moment, I think.
Did Mr. Tobias use his lawyer skills to find Sean's house or he must have followed him at some point. It's great how they both just sort of give in to each other... both thinking they're controlling the situation at all times, when neither see where this is going. I think Toby is falling for Sean and he's not ready to accept that. It's like part of him wants Keller. He'll always love Keller. The other half of him knows it's time to move on. His relationship with Keller is not going to work with Chris never getting out. Part of him likes Sean for who he is and I think Toby likes the stability of Sean. He's not unpredictable like Chris. That's what Toby needs right now, someone with his life straight. Another part compares the 2 men. He should maybe not talk to Sean about the comparisons, but it's ok to notice! Usually I'm not interested in anything fisting, but the image of Keller stretching Toby to the limits... Toby trying to contain screams of ecstasy... god that's hot!
Then we have Sean, pushing away, at first, any tenderness Toby tries to show, and eventually giving in and loving it. It's sad, Sean thinking he can only have that wonderful, loving, caring tenderness for a short time. He deserves it and I'm pretty sure by the end of this story he will have it, but I'll have to wait and see. It's hot how Sean totally gets off watching Keller all the time, knowing exactly what Toby can do for a man.
As neither of them put up a real fight, I think a part of them knows they are good together and they do care about each other. I loved this part, it's amazing. The whole story is awesome!! I get soooo excited when I see another part posted. I really needed this today, too. Something enjoyable. Thanks!
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I think Tim could be a really good friend like that. He may be self-absorbed and tantrumy, but he really does care and want to do right by people. I think that would work better with with friends who aren't prone to screwing up than it does with prisoners who are.
I used to be a really hands-off writer, who left a lot of room for readers to figure out character motives and such, but over the years I've shifted to really trying to capture specifics. This story was kind of an attempt to step back and leave it ambiguous again, hoping people would read the characters in their own way, so I love so much that you've told me how you see them. I could natter on at length in response, but some of this is in where the story goes from here.
Sean definitely deserves some love and tenderness.
Thank you! I'm so happy you're enjoying it! We're all in need of some happy escapism at the moment, I think.
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