I knew this would be amazing, but..edub82April 1 2015, 22:35:10 UTC
You made this even more beautiful than I thought. I'm not the type to get all weepy at sex scenes, but you provoked it, damnit! And they were even "civilized men" about it. Oh how I love a dirty talking, conservative Elliot. This was such an intense, realistic, emotional journey. I feel like I've been through hell and high water with the boys.
i am in awe of the way that you managed to keep Toby and Elliot remarkably true to their original characters. I feel like I have a deeper understanding of both characters because of YOUR story.. Especially the ever dynamic Toby. This was all amplified by re-reading the earlier stuff, as I said a few chapters ago.
Watching these two grow has been a torturous, heartwarming, tear jerking, beautiful ride. I seriously can't thank you enough for letting us into your lovely, creative mind. This is really a gift. God, the end of the Cut and Run series and the end of Someone Like You in one week. I need kittens and ice cream.
I'm going to have to check your page periodically, because I CAN'T WAIT to see what else you create. You have an amazing gift and a wonderful writing style. Do you write professionally? I sure hope so. I don't feel there are adequate words to express how wonderful this all was. Okay, I'm going to start to babble if I don't wrap this up, but thank you from the bottom of my little fangirl heart. -E
Re: I knew this would be amazing, but..drsquidloveApril 4 2015, 14:36:07 UTC
Yeah! Weepy sex scene! That's awesome!
I can only assume that my weakness for the guys talking dirty was utterly transparent in this story.
Y'know, I hadn't really thought about this, but... while I think it will take some time before Elliot can be fucked up the ass (especially since Toby won't do it until he's sure Elliot is genuinely eager), I think it will take even longer before Elliot is willing to fuck Toby up the ass anywhere but in bed, where it feels more like making love and less like fucking. One day Elliot might be relaxed enough to bend Toby over a table and get a little dominating, but that will be a very long time coming. (But it might be the happiest day of Toby's life.)
Hooray! Trying to make this all work within the characters was the goal. I'm totally in favour of taking a little liberty wild plot devices with the boys to get some fun stories, but I really wanted this to feel like them as much as possible. It was way, way harder with Elliot, obviously. :-D And far harder to tackle him on Toby's issues and Chris than the gay thing.
Nah, I do other stuff professionally; writing is just love.
Thank you so much, edub! You're so incredibly kind. Your comments mean a great deal.
i am in awe of the way that you managed to keep Toby and Elliot remarkably true to their original characters. I feel like I have a deeper understanding of both characters because of YOUR story.. Especially the ever dynamic Toby. This was all amplified by re-reading the earlier stuff, as I said a few chapters ago.
Watching these two grow has been a torturous, heartwarming, tear jerking, beautiful ride. I seriously can't thank you enough for letting us into your lovely, creative mind. This is really a gift. God, the end of the Cut and Run series and the end of Someone Like You in one week. I need kittens and ice cream.
I'm going to have to check your page periodically, because I CAN'T WAIT to see what else you create. You have an amazing gift and a wonderful writing style. Do you write professionally? I sure hope so. I don't feel there are adequate words to express how wonderful this all was. Okay, I'm going to start to babble if I don't wrap this up, but thank you from the bottom of my little fangirl heart.
-E
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Yeah! Weepy sex scene! That's awesome!
I can only assume that my weakness for the guys talking dirty was utterly transparent in this story.
Y'know, I hadn't really thought about this, but... while I think it will take some time before Elliot can be fucked up the ass (especially since Toby won't do it until he's sure Elliot is genuinely eager), I think it will take even longer before Elliot is willing to fuck Toby up the ass anywhere but in bed, where it feels more like making love and less like fucking. One day Elliot might be relaxed enough to bend Toby over a table and get a little dominating, but that will be a very long time coming. (But it might be the happiest day of Toby's life.)
Hooray! Trying to make this all work within the characters was the goal. I'm totally in favour of taking a little liberty wild plot devices with the boys to get some fun stories, but I really wanted this to feel like them as much as possible. It was way, way harder with Elliot, obviously. :-D And far harder to tackle him on Toby's issues and Chris than the gay thing.
Nah, I do other stuff professionally; writing is just love.
Thank you so much, edub! You're so incredibly kind. Your comments mean a great deal.
S.
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