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PART 12

Jul 23, 2013 19:15

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You'll get what you deserve [4/?] anonymous June 19 2016, 01:47:57 UTC

"Heh what do you think will happen once this video gets out?" "It'll definitely ruin his reputation." They looked over at the passed out body. "Should we take a few more photos?" "Yeah..." The gang started posing the info broker making sure to get his leaking ass and cum covered face the most."Well let's go." They chuckled "This'll teach him to mess with people's lives." One of them said before they left the apartment and building. As they walked out they uploaded the video to the dollars website,knowing that allot of people will probably see it and maybe take advantage of the situation. Meanwhile a man was just entering the building with a scowl clearly showing on his features. He had his phone up to his ear as a person on the other line kept saying "Yes he's there I know it." "And how the hell do you know that?" The man mumbled as he entered the elevator. "I told you my ex gang went there to teach him a lesson or something along those lines." "So why the hell do you want me to go and..." the man clenched his fist "Save him." "Because I know your a good man and besides once you see what happened I know you won't want to hurt him."

He finally made it to the floor "Like hell I'd care about what happens to that louse." "You don't have to care just get him a doctor or something, I'm not sure what they did but I'm sure it has to be bad." The man looked at the door which was slightly ajar. "Oh and by the way I've heard rumors that his legs are broken so be careful when picking him up." "Wait what?!" But the line went dead. "Fucking flea.As soon as I finally started to feel at peace you had to ruin it even if it is indirectly." The man entered the room and his nose crinkled in disgust "Smells like shit." He looked around the apartment noticing how messy it was. "Just what the fuck did the flea get himself into?" He started walking to the bedroom. "He's probably fine..." he mumbled to himself as he stepped inside.

When he looked at the limp body though his whole body froze up instantly. "F-flea?" No response, he felt his phone buzz and since he needed something to distract him from the horrific aftermath he looked down to see a text. [You find him?] [He's been fucking...] [What did they break his arms also?] [Your fucking piece of shit gang raped him!] [Shit...Just get him to a doctor and I'll make sure these guys never see the light of day again] Shizuo looked back up to Izaya. His chest felt tight but he just played it off as anger towards the people who touched his prey.

No way in hell was he worried about the the flea.

His eyes trailed to the wheelchair "Damn it flea!" He went over to the body before picking him up as carefully as he could. he gave the wheel chair one final glance before he decided to take the blanket to cover up the naked body he was holding. 'I'll take him to Shinra's, Yeah Shinra will deal with him and then I can go back with my life.' He thought before heading out to Shinra's "Damn I really need a smoke." He balanced the body before sending Shinra a quick text [The flea's been badly hurt so I'm bringing him over] once he clicked send he pulled the body close to his chest, almost in a protective way before he started running to the doctor's home.

OP anonymous June 20 2016, 16:26:22 UTC

Damn, great chapter, I guess it's time for Izaya to rest, at least for a while. Also, Author-san, thank you for making Shizuo the knight in shining armor! I know I didn't specified anything, but personally I don't see him as the villian, I don't think he could rape anyone (not even Izaya). Anyway, I can't say I don't enjoy those kind of fics, but for this one the saviour!Shizuo fits better. And the description of his rage (and concern, even if he doesn't want to admit it) when he found Izaya was heavenly!!
I'm curious now though! Who was the ex gang leader? My first thought was Chikage, but thinking better, maybe it's Kida? Or an OC? Is he a secret mastermind? Why did he called Shizuo?
I'll wait for the next chapter, have a good week Author-san ☆!

Re:OP anonymous July 1 2016, 03:08:52 UTC

Well to clear it up it's just a little OC of mine heh. Though it might be interesting for either Chikage or Kida to be it but I'm saving them for a different role in the story. (Oh and the OC might become a bigger part of the story if I feel it will add to the plot)

Re: OP anonymous July 1 2016, 18:57:49 UTC

My first thought was Chikage because he and his gang aren't from Ikebukuro, and I can imagine him having a mutual respect relationship with Shizuo, but he is still with this gang? So I thought it can be Kida! Because he is an ex-gang leader, and closer to Shizuo and Izaya, but Kida hates Izaya and even if the yellow scarves raped him, I don't think Kida would care enough :/ An OC is the better option to stay the things in character tbh.
But now that the mysterious OC appeared, he added more plot to the story though. So, I think this has potential!!

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