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PART 9

Jun 25, 2011 08:32

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Deflowering [3/3] anonymous October 1 2011, 18:37:22 UTC

It wasn't that Tsugaru didn't love Psyche. He knew that his brother loved Psyche more than anything else in the world, would give up his life for Psyche if that's what he needed to do to prove it. But Tsugaru just wasn't ready.

Let's wait until we're married.

Delic gasped as his partner hoisted his legs over his shoulders. Psyche parted Delic's thighs and kissed the tight pucker between his partings. The blond man grasped the sheets tightly in his fists like a last rope tied to his sanity and gasped sharply Psyche pushed a velvety tongue into his dry hole.

The sweet, sweet Psyche was harder than Delic imagined. Of course, he was Tsu-chan. Psyche wouldn't leave Tsugaru in the morning with a cold, empty space where Psyche held him through the night.

~

Delic was eating a hot dog at the time. Clarification: they were all eating hot dogs at the time. Added clarification: Shizuo, Izaya, and the ones in between were all eating chili dogs at the time.

For Shizuo, Tsugaru, and Delic, this was a delicacy. For Izaya, Psyche, and Hibiya, this was a horror. It started with Tsugaru and Psyche on an innocent date. They were the happiest of the bunch, earlier smiling at each other and holding hands and now eating their lunch in peace. Delic had caught sight of them first and invited himself to tag along just because it was fun to hit on Psyche while Tsugaru was around. Hibiya happened to be in the area at the time, utterly lost, and joined the party. He and Delic had been staring at each other awkwardly the entire time, embarrassed to be seen by others like a pair on a double date, and they were definitely the twitchy, awkward duo of the table. As for Izaya and Shizuo, they'd been chasing each other but immediately dropped their antics once they saw their duplicates on an assumed double date. That was not allowed as far as they were concerned and they tagged along to foil any intimacy.

Ultimately this left them at a table for six and six white plates muddied with spots of chili.

Perhaps because of Shizuo's oral fixation, perhaps because of his fascination with human mouths, Delic couldn't help but observe how everybody devoured the meal. Shizuo and Izaya ate sloppily, as if racing. It had a primal sort of You're Eating Fast So I'll Eat Faster Now kind of aesthetic. Red drool suited both of their lips. Tsugaru and Psyche... Well, had Delic not been so focused on Hibiya, he would have definitely noticed them. Psyche licked along the bun and slowly sucked the top, keeping eye contact with Tsugaru. Tsugaru was also orally making love to his chili dog, all the while staring at Psyche like it was him Tsugaru wanted to eat on the spot. And then there was Hibiya.

Hibiya was, quite simply, a mess. Tsugaru and Psyche just had to pick the one restaurant that didn't have silverware and Delic had to condone them for that. True, it was only for their own devices but the sight before him now would make him forever remember this restaurant.

The princely copy fumbled awkwardly with the treat in his hands. He held it from one end, then the other, each time cradling it like the most delicate but disgusting thing in the world. Of course Hibiya was just trying not to stain the gloves he refused to take off. It didn't help. Some chili plopped along his finger and Hibiya raised the hot dog high in the air to lick along the falling trail before it stained. Hibiya gave up after some minutes of awkward cat licks, then held the hot dog at each end so that he held it perfectly balanced, and finally ate only the tip. The tip was all he could manage, trying to stuff the chili, hot dog, and bun into his small mouth at the same time.

Hibiya's nose wrinkled, his eyebrows knit, he was seriously intent on eating this thing. And there was no way Delic could ignore those cute, breathy grunts while he struggled to eat the foreign object. It was around this time that Hibiya, hunched over and contorted in a way only Hibiya could manage to eat a chili dog, looked up with the widest doe eyes and a bunch half stuffed in, half falling out his mouth.

Delic felt his cock twitch in his pants.

He yanked the prince up by the wrist and beelined for the nearest bathroom.

OP anonymous October 1 2011, 20:30:41 UTC

Happy OP is ridiculously happy ♥

Thank you so much a!a, these were absolutely great! It was a surprise to see so many little drabbles, and it was really interesting to see so many different scenarios.
I don't know why but I find Delic extremely appealing with women, and I loved how you portrayed his approach with them so well. I think my favorite is the fifth one: despite Delic not being, well, really a gentleman I can seriously picture him acting this way when teenager and with a girl, totally interested into sex but not really into girls and relationships. And the last line is absolutely perfect XD
The fourth one is very precious too, though probably the saddest. Delic's character has a lot of sides and I find really precious when he's shown to actually care about his loved one and their first time, so such a scenario is pretty sad. It kind of reminded me of a fic I read once when something similar happened.
Oh, the second one was adorable too. The scenario was a classic with character like him so I really liked to read it, and it was so cute to see Delic already showing that flattering attitude of his. And the ending was adorable <3
But the others were great too! The first one was very interesting to read, fifteen years old, smug and strangely naive Delic was kind of adorable to read, and the one with Izaya caught me by surprise ( I personally didn't expect him to come out in this), though the parallel with Shizuo was perfect, and a bit sad on both parts.
The one with Psyche was longer and I really enjoyed how you worked the context and the thing with Tsugaru. Delic always seems to get the lower hand in this kind of situations (and I admit I kind of like it *shot*). The last one... the last one was adorable and hilarious and I loved that it involved Hibiya XD

Thank you again a!a, really~

Re: Deflowering [3/3] anonymous October 9 2011, 01:55:02 UTC

Oh A!A... so much love for you <333333 I love all the angles you took on this, but in particular
Six years later, he kissed her on the cheek like one would welcome back an old friend, only this time she came to buy his services.
This. This line officially made me fall in love with your fill ffffff my god♡

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