PART 4

Aug 21, 2010 13:08

part 4

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Impulses 3/3 anonymous October 18 2010, 03:41:30 UTC
Shizuo withdrew his other hand from the cracked and indented plaster of the wall and was on top of Mikado in a fraction of a second, hands grabbing the boy’s waist, first, squeezing tightly at his hipbones, then moving up to his head, pulling sharply at his hair. There was a barely contained hunger in his eyes as he looked at Mikado’s mouth, not his eyes, and asked, “You sure you wanna go there, idiot?”

Mikado made stifled sound halfway between a yelp and a moan, not that Shizuo cared what the hell that even meant as an answer because he was already pressing his lips to Mikado’s, prying open his mouth with the insane strength he possessed - even in his oral muscles. His and Mikado’s tongues met, it was all very warm and wet, and Mikado seemed to submit himself to having Shizuo’s tongue stuck down his throat as Shizuo picked the boy up bodily by his belt and rammed Mikado into the door of his apartment, resulting in bleeding lips, a bloody tongue, a cry of pain from Mikado, and the taste of blood.

It was actually very thrilling and served to make Shizuo want to do it again, and harder, until that damn door opened up and they wouldn’t have to do this in the hallway, but as Shizuo picked up Mikado again, he was fortunate enough to see the pained expression on the kid’s face just in time, and-

It was a struggle, it was always a struggle - after all, he was already moving and who the hell was he to stop his limbs from picking up Mikado and using him as a battering ram to open the door to his flat? He had to compensate by channeling that hot violence somewhere else, and the only thing to do was turn them both around so that it was he who would end up battering down the door.

It seemed to happen in slow motion. Shizuo was still attached at the mouth to Mikado, whose eyes were gradually getting wider as he realized he was being turned around, and possibly he was also realizing that he could kiss his safety deposit goodbye as surely as he was kissing Heiwajima Shizuo right now. The energy still burned in Shizuo, and he could feel his blood boiling beneath his skin and burning his mouth where he could still taste it, both his and Mikado’s, and then-

BAM!

The door flew off its hinges, Shizuo landed flat on his back on top of it, and Mikado landed on top of him. Their teeth smacked uncomfortably, but with that particular fit of rage subsiding, Shizuo raised his hands from Mikado’s belt to both sides of the boy’s startled face.

“Shizuo-san…” seemed all he could say for a few moments, until Shizuo pulled at his hair (slightly more gently this time) and brought his head down for another kiss. This one was still bloody, still bold, still aggressive, still sharp as he used his teeth on Mikado’s lips and his tongue, but it was, for the most part, controlled and not ruled by any particularly violent impulses. Instead, it was ruled by another impulse that Shizuo had a feeling he wouldn’t have to fight against when he was around Mikado, if the way Mikado was kissing him back with equal fervor was anything to do by.

He was getting better, always getting better. With this thought, he grinned into the kiss and let his hands wander under Mikado’s jacket and shirt, wanting to touch the skin of someone who wasn’t nearly as warm-blooded as him and not feeling ashamed of the impulse.

fin.

Hope you liked it! My first DRRR fic... >.>

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Re: Impulses 3/3 anonymous October 19 2010, 00:09:21 UTC
OP here.

I loved your fill so much. I was seriously excited someone even filled this out at all.

A bit different than what I expected (in regards to the kissing), but it didn't detract from my enjoyment at all. It would be amazing if you wrote more Shizuo/Mikado or any DRRR fan-fiction.

Please don't think I'm being insincere; I really do appreciate your fill.

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Re: Impulses 3/3 anonymous October 19 2010, 00:15:14 UTC
Writer!anon speaking!

I'm glad you liked it! I realized about halfway through writing it that it probably wasn't exactly what you wanted to see and started to worry but at that point when you're half done and already have a plan it's hard to change it. Mayyyybe I'll try again with like, a sequel from this fic, something shorter and probably more what you were looking to see?

I'll keep it in mind but if you don't see something within the week it's safe to assume I forgot about the mini-sequel... or something. Derp.

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Re: Impulses 3/3 anonymous October 19 2010, 00:21:54 UTC
I'd be glad if you wanted to!

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Re: Impulses 3/3 anonymous October 19 2010, 00:27:25 UTC
It's so rare to see a Shizuo/Mikado fill ;-; Not the op, but this made me happy! This pairing doesn't get enough love. For a first try at DRRR, I'd say it's pretty good!

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Re: Impulses 3/3 anonymous October 19 2010, 00:48:17 UTC
Aw, thank you so much, anon! Your comment means a lot to me.

♥ from writer!anon.

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Re: Impulses 3/3 anonymous October 19 2010, 01:21:25 UTC
You're very welcome! :)

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