It's taken long enough -_-;;

[dria_uesugi]

I'm trying not to think about how long ago the last chapter was, however I swear on my *pnish* DVD collection that the next chapter will be written faster. Considering how this chapter ends, you're all going to be very grateful... ^_^;;

Title: Nile Blue chapter 28!
Rating: PG
Summary: This is another bitty chapter that serves mainly to move things

Comments

[crazy_squirtle]

OK, I really liked the beginning- the starting on Kime and Tuti and their lines from the play. I must admit I'd been wondering about this aspect of the production, because it's set in ancient Egypt, how casual or classical the style of speach would be. I think this really works, because... I've lost my train of thought... but it really works, and leaves it open enough and accessible enough for the audience.

I don't know why I'm doing an analysis of a fake play but never mind!!!

[crazy_squirtle]

"None of it though, not the watchers or the frowning choreographer or the other actors could stop Takashi from flashing a sparkling grin at Tuti from across the room. It lasted all of three seconds, vanishing when Takashi slipped back into being Khnumhotep again,"

and this line, don't ask me why- LOVE IT! I think it just captures how I imagine Nagayan taking his acting really seriously but also being able to flip in and out of it in a second. And we all know Nagayan's big toothy grin is one of the cutest things on the planet, especially in my imagination ^___^

[crazy_squirtle]

"The half-made props he’d become used to were being replaced by the finished items,"

DON'T ask me why, but this made me imagine all the guys from Burimyu swinging round brooms and hairbrushes pretending they're swords. XD

*sniggers*

[crazy_squirtle]

oh, and I've said this already, but I really loved that little scene with Kime and Nagayan at their apartment. Somehow the image of Kime with ruffled damp hair and no make up, wearing a huge baggy T shirt is so indearing when we only ever see him in his polished rock-star (*snort*) persona with not a single hair out of place.

[crazy_squirtle]

oh, and the ending... well it wasn't a cliff-hanger for me because I already knew what was going to happen, but it's still kinda like 'oooh bugger there's going to be some serious crap hitting the fan in the next few parts'

In fact, in preparation of the inevitable misunderstandings and complications that are going to occur, I'm going to go ahead and slap my palm to my forehead, whack Tuti over the head and call him a baka now.

[dria_uesugi]

I feel I can only respond if I make a list so here goes...

1. You spamming my inbox is very amusing, please be doing it more often ^_~
2. Nagayan's smile beats everything (except possibly the sound of Tuti laughing *melts*)
3. If I had the time (and knew how to write a play) I'd write my own version of NB... but I have no time ^^;
4. I'm sure the guys do pretend hair brushes are swords, in fact I may have to work that into a fic at some point...
5. Tuti is going to deserve a lot of smacks round the back of the head soon... now if only I could decide whose perspective the next chapter should be... oh no, no it has to be Tuti ^___^

*hugs*