fic: If You Want Something Done Right

[dria1029]

Title: If You Want Something Done Right
Author: dria1029
Pairings: Onew-centric
Genre: PWP, Humor
Warnings: Language, onewfuckinghimselfwithhisowndicknoregretskthankxbai
Rating: NC-17
Summary: During one-on-Onew sexy time, Shinee’s leader figures out just how impeccably flexible his man bits are. Oh how lucky indeed.
Word Count: 2,500+
a/n: Personally, I’d

Comments

[koukaiaru]

Waaah took me longer than i expected -.- Me & time management don't really go well together. Anyway, I actually liked it 8). And the stuff in parentheses didn't really throw me off haha, it was funny xD

The whole thing was funny. Which I really didn't expect even though you told me to expect it haha. I mean I just wasn't able to imagine how you make that kink funny but you did it. Jinki's whole thought process is just... golden xD.

And I like the idea of shinee wanting to be able to auto-fellatio 8). And this: to hope that when his band mates barge in on him fucking himself again, they'd see the light too. xD I actually laughed.

But even though you made it funny the actual act was hot too. Maybe because I really find it hot in my head so the funny factor didn't throw me off. And this omg That there could be a mirror propped up in front of him yes please, that'd be the hottest thing ever.

Oh and i like this a lot too: To have his cock so proudly stuffed in a his rabbit hole-as it were-, and to have his hole stuffed with the same cock-just pure genius, pure madness, pure wonder. All I wanted to say while reading it was "Yeah, Jinki, mte." xD

Let Onew be Jekyll and Jinki be Hyde. <-- i snorted for obvious reasons XD

Ok sorry for this lame ass comment, but I actually had 10 minutes after waking up and before going out to leave it here -.-'' Hope you can forgive me, chuu~~

[dria1029]

Sorry this is so late ;_;

LOL now that I look back at it, even I cringe at some parts, some of the language I chose. Especially all the synonyms for ass oh God XD

Well even as old and I am (and as much as I've done >.>) I still find sex pretty hilarious. Well, when I'm not too aroused to think straight, that is.

I don't think I could handle imagining the rest of them watching him do that. :o LMAO but I do see them wanting to touch him/fuck him themselves and him like, unsheathing his claws and threatening to make them leave. Key though...actually I'm not sure about Key. I see shock and disgust (and maybe envy) for Keybee lol.

Happy you enjoyed it <33333