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dreykar June 14 2009, 02:40:22 UTC
Thanks for the review, hopefully the next chpter will be as long or longer.

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onychophoran June 7 2009, 15:30:06 UTC
I've been enjoying your fic, but you seriously need a beta reader or at the very least a better spell check. What is spurlocking? Did you mean spelunking?

Also, the new font size is much easier on the eyes, thanks.

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dreykar June 14 2009, 02:45:52 UTC
Thanks for the feedback. 'Spelunking' slipped through, I've fixed it. I was thinking too I'm using the Australian spellings for things rather than the American so they may look wrong too.

I should look into a beta reader.

Thanks!

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onychophoran June 14 2009, 23:20:27 UTC
if you need one, i'm happy to do it.

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dreykar June 14 2009, 02:49:41 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it. I'm trying to pack in quite a bit into the next chapter so I may not be able to update this Sunday but I'll do my best!

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holagurl_13 June 8 2009, 04:45:28 UTC
loved it! i luv this story so much and YAY for bigger font! ^_____^

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dreykar June 14 2009, 02:50:21 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it. More on the way soon I hope!

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