Writerverse Challenge #5b: beginnings and ends part 2

[dreximgirl]

Title: Secret Addiction
Author of original beginning: fictionalfaerie
Word Count: 198 (without the beginning)
Rating: G
Original/Fandom: Merlin (BBC) AU
Pairings (if any): Merlin/Arthur
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/etc): None
Summary: Arthur has an addiction that isn’t coffee.

Comments

[ty_writes]

That was real cute. I have a weakness, for unintentional stalker!Arthur.

As for critique, nothing really jumped out at me as wrong. It was readable, the characters were in character, it was sweet, and I'm going to smile for the rest of the day because of this story. I think that is what every fluff writer wants they're story to accomplish.

[dreximgirl]

Thank you so much!

You have no idea how much it means to me that it set you up with a smile for the day *huggles*

You're Welcome

[ty_writes]