(Fic) Drabble: Blue-Grey Smoke

Aug 10, 2007 20:06

Another drabble. Because the Edoro begged and pleaded and I was pleased with my productivity today. So a drabble.

Like anyone else is reading this journal.

Blue-Grey Smoke

There were many ways to lose one’s sight. To a fire-jutsu, that was a cool one. Torture, maybe, like some guy getting lucky with a kunai but not lucky enough, since the kunai’d ( Read more... )

zombie-fic, drabble, fanfic, one-shot, naruto, tonbo

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lazy_writer August 10 2007, 08:45:40 UTC
Hee! He's just such a total asshole. Bullying kids and such. I love him.

Like I said, there's this definite overtone that he's not really nearly as okay with it as he wants to be. Like he's trying to be nonchalant, only it's just...he's BLIND. How do you DEAL with that?

Yeah.

I still say you should drabble about how he does go about dealing with it.

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drelfina August 10 2007, 08:47:24 UTC
TOnbo doesn't like drabbles. He prefers you to emo him.

I can't emo Tonbo. He just goes all bullying and stuff.

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lazy_writer August 10 2007, 08:52:28 UTC
That's okay, because he deals with it by being an asshole and bullying people.

Anyway, you're a better writer than me. So nyah. Write it! Wriiiite iiiiit!

You know you want to.

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drelfina August 10 2007, 08:55:56 UTC
I caaaan't. I has no inspiration. And Tonbo doesn't like me. He wants to sit in the shade and smoke instead.

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imepic August 10 2007, 13:20:58 UTC
I'm faintly curious as to where the zombie obsession came from. First Raido, then Tonbo...

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drelfina August 10 2007, 17:21:22 UTC
It's something like this:

1. People keep writing Raidou with angsty emo fire wounds.

2. I don't want to be cliched or boring.

3. Fire wounds are emo and boring.

4. What's not emo and boring?
- dog bites
- torture
- zombie attack

So there you go.

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imepic August 10 2007, 17:42:28 UTC
That... sort of makes sense.

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drelfina August 10 2007, 18:30:57 UTC
Of course it does. :)

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realnobiki August 10 2007, 21:08:42 UTC
i love tonbo all over again. not just because of the weird zombie thing, but because he and i could sit on my back balcony, devoid of children, and smoke. every now and then we could snarl something sarcastic at each other.

i am guilty of the raido/emo/fire thing *cringe*. but to defend myself, he's not emo over the scar, he's emo over what happened to get it.

nyah nyah, my raido could be up your tonbo. *smirk* or they could both beat on shimon - that would be fun!

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drelfina August 11 2007, 04:25:59 UTC
The RPer wanted a Ton. He went all bitter at me.

Tonbo does not do emo! he does bullying little kids, and sneering at plebians.

Shimon does not appreciate getting beat on.

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rhyssafireheart August 17 2007, 02:42:43 UTC
I'm going to have zombies on the brain now from reading these drabbles. Not that I mind or anything.

/wonders if there's any kids around she can scare with zombie stories...

*grin*

I had to look up who Tonbo was though, because I didn't recognize the name.

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drelfina August 17 2007, 05:36:44 UTC
heh. Tonbo is... the chuunin with bandages on his face. :)

Yay! Zombies = good.

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drelfina August 17 2007, 19:22:42 UTC
hahahahaha... maybe! :)

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