Comments | dreiser: Fanfic Update! Pace Line: One (Whip It, Babe Ruthless/Iron Maven)

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Fanfic Update! Pace Line: One (Whip It, Babe Ruthless/Iron Maven)

Feb 06, 2010 22:41

TITLE: Pace Line
SERIES: Whip It
AUTHOR: Dreiser
EMAIL: dreiser7@yahoo.com
YAHOO ID: dreiser7
MY WEBSITE: http://www.dreiser.org/
CONTENT: F/F romance. F/F sex. Babe Ruthless/Iron Maven. Sequel to Versus.SUMMARY: Babe Ruthless and Iron Maven's relationship was all about the pacing ( Read more... )

femslash, whip it, movies, fanfic

Comments 10

tkoala February 7 2010, 09:15:55 UTC

So gratified.

dalammadt February 7 2010, 14:43:47 UTC

Awesome story

goldenbrown09 February 7 2010, 15:48:23 UTC

Aaawww... I saw the movie yestarday and I was wondering what a good pairing these two would be! So, what a great surprise to open my livejournal and find this fanfic!
Thank you so much! I think I'm in love with Maven too! ;P
I am making a fanvideo about them. But I don't know if I chose a good song :\ (Clumsy by Fergie)

dreiser February 8 2010, 05:33:37 UTC

Juliette Lewis just serves to make the character really endearing, imho. I saw your music video, it was really good! I wish I was good at video editing but I sadly fail in that creative area. I'm really glad you like the fanfic. I'm considering writing a third fanfic and making a little fanfic trilogy for the ship.

goldenbrown09 February 8 2010, 20:56:39 UTC

Thank you for watching it! And be sure that I will read all your Whip it fanfics! I just loved your Iron Maven. I want one for myself :B

I remember Juliette Lewis so cute on "The Other Sister". But now, she definitely go my attention...

jsword March 3 2010, 01:31:52 UTC

Have I told you I love your stories lately? Maven and Ruthless are just way too cute together. <3

Oh and it's not Axis of Evil but Axels of Evil. That's what the DvD subtitles say at least. :p

Oh and who's Travis?

dreiser March 3 2010, 05:05:51 UTC

Axles of Evil. That's embarassing though. I fixed it, thanks for the tip. Travis is just a random boyfriend I made up because it seemed implausible Bliss wouldn't date anyone in the past two years between 17 and 19.

revolos55 March 3 2010, 06:59:06 UTC

Love this. The convo at the Hurl Scouts table was sweet, and I loved Bliss thanking Maven for teaching her jamming ;) Maven's speech cracked me up too: “You hate me, you bitches really hate me!” Hahaha.

Love the bit with Maven and Mahyem about level 4 pissed off.

Nothing that would alert Maven’s attention but a sort of pervasive chilliness that left Bliss with the knowledge that if she ever did anything to hurt their team captain they would go after her like a pack of wolves. / Though she knew she should be worried about this, instead Bliss found it perversely adorable. She liked how protective and close the Holy Rollers were with Maven. And seeing how Maven was with them, how she doted over them and would gently tease them, it showed Bliss a different side to her girlfriend that made her all that much more attractive. - Love this whole bit too.