Fanfic Update! A Thousand Glimpses: Eighteen (Bianca/Reese)

[dreiser]

TITLE: A Thousand Glimpses
SERIES: All My Children
AUTHOR: dreiser
EMAIL: dreiser7@yahoo.com
YAHOO ID: dreiser7
MY WEBSITE: http://www.dreiser.org/CONTENT: F/F romance. F/F sex. Bianca/Reese. Breeze

Comments

[aweso32]

It was so surreal to read this while surreptitiously checking the live feed thread of what happened today. Mostly, I just hid in your fic until it was over... and such an easy place to hide! You have such a great handle on this story! Again, love the music, the research on cars & clothes, love that Miranda gets attention... Love it all!

Oh, and I don't think you need to apologize for having Bianca be a top- can't fight the facts, right?

[dreiser]

Bianca topping does seem to be canon. lol. I need to go into some sort of analysis at some point that the reason Reese feels okay letting Bianca top so much is that she feels safe with her and has the ability to trust and let go with Bianca that she lacked with previous lovers.

Today wasn't as bad as what I thought it would be in terms of the kiss. At least Zach initiated it. What killed me was Kendall's toast. If Kinks doesn't get fixed and Kendall doesn't lose her resentment towards Gabrielle it could really negatively effect how Gabrielle grows up.

I mean, Kendall was so worried that Miranda would end up like her because of her origins in rape but at this point Gabrielle could wind up feeling like the unwanted or problem child because of all this which sucks since she's innocent in all this mess.

Kendall's heart

[careofsoul]

How many times has Erica or Greenlee commented that Kendall is not "right"? I think somehow they will blame all of Kendall's behavior on her heart . . . Binks will forgive kendall for so long and then she will snap if she thinks that she is mistreating Gaby. However, I previously read something you wrote about seeing Miranda as the "good and pure" child because of her origins - now does this set the stage for Gaby to be the rebel?

Re: Kendall's heart

[dreiser]

I've always thought that because of Miranda's origins in rape she would grow up to become a show heroine like her mother. Someone beloved by everyone. Gabrielle I wanted to take after Erica more in a headstrong sort of reckless personality. This is setting it up where if it doesn't get fixed and even if it does, I think Gabrielle will turn out to be not so friendly towards her family that doesn't include her mothers and her sister.

Gabrielle is going to have issues because of how Kendall resented how she came about and unless that gets fixed it will effect her development. I'm not saying she'll be a rebel or a troublemaker but I can see this whole thing ironically turning out that Kendall makes a miniature version of herself because of her resentment of an innocent child.

Bianca as a top

[careofsoul]

If you are going into the logic of Bianca being on top related to Reese letting go - you could also easily tie this into what happens in their sex life after Reese finds out about the rape. Most common and quite frankly healthy response to that awareness is letting the rape survivor have the feeling of control.

Re: Bianca as a top

[dreiser]

That works after the rape reveal but I was more responding to the slew of apparent Bianca topping in this chapter. lol. Although to be honest, I don't think there has to be a ton of analyzing behind Bianca topping more than Reese. I didn't even notice I was writing Bianca topping that much until someone told me. lol.