This story is so cute. I know you've had a few negative comments on the pace (how dare you have a life around updates, MAKE THEM MAKE OUT etc!) but hopefully that wont dissuade you. I actually really like all the little details in your writing that build up the characters gradually.. Yup thats a little (immensely) geeky of me, but i'm coming to terms with it.
I'm equally immensely geeky because the gradual character development in personality and relationships is something I look for in the fics I read myself so I try to do the same thing in my own writing. As for the negative comments about how long my updates take and my general slow pacing of the fic it's never really bothered me. I've been writing fanfic since I was sixteen sadly enough and I've heard way worse.
Plus... I don't tend to listen very well when I think the stuff being said isn't that smart. lol. I'm glad you like the fic!
I just read through everything so far in one sitting. Very nice! I'm eagerly looking forward to the rest of it. I also wanted to note that as currently posted, a significant portion of chapter 7 is repeated in the post.
I'm not sure what you mean about Chapter 7 repeating. I checked that post and none of the text repeats and this post doesn't have any of the scenes from Chapter 7 in it. Thus I am confused.
But I'm glad you enjoy my fic. Thanks so much. But please, help with my confusion.
Re: Great Ficpiedra_lumbreJune 19 2008, 21:55:19 UTC
Sorry I confused you, I'll elaborate. About midway through ch. 7 the post repeats, starting with the paragraph that begins: If there was one thing about Hermione’s personality . . . The repeated material ends three paragraphs from the end of the post which is probably why it wouldn't be obvious except on a complete read through. Hope that helps.
Oh, this was wonderful! I just caught up with this fic, and I love how you've strung everything along. I liked how you slowly developed their relationship over time; everything happened at a natural pace, and I think your Luna is perfect. Again, I really enjoyed this and am looking forward to more!!
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Plus... I don't tend to listen very well when I think the stuff being said isn't that smart. lol. I'm glad you like the fic!
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But I'm glad you enjoy my fic. Thanks so much. But please, help with my confusion.
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