Sea Fever

Sep 17, 2011 21:11

Title: Sea Fever
Author: dreamlitnight
Genre/pairing: Supernatural, hurt/comfort
Characters: Dean W. and Sam W.
Rating: G
Word-count: approx. 2,700
Summary: Dean has a fever and wanders off while Sam isn't looking.
Spoilers: None
Warnings: Contains crack, angst, illness and Winchester brother schmoopiness.
Disclaimer: The Winchesters are not mine. Also, the ( Read more... )

dean, angst, fever, sneezing, hurt/comfort, sick dean, supernatural, sam

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dollarformyname September 18 2011, 05:04:16 UTC
Awesome! I liked how you conveyed Dean's disconnected thoughts and his confusion at being jostled around by the crowd. Poor Deeaaan! ♥ Thank you!

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dreamlitnight September 18 2011, 20:04:56 UTC
I am so glad you enjoyed it! I am always hopeful when I write for a prompt that grabs me, but also never sure if I am getting what the prompter wants. It was such stormy weather here yesterday and somehow Dean had to suffer the same thing, even if it was mostly in his muddled head. lol. Thanks for the great prompt and for the lovely comments.

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si_star_x September 18 2011, 17:25:53 UTC
This was really imaginative and awesome. I could just feel Dean's confusion and really felt for him. Fantastic job. :)

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dreamlitnight September 18 2011, 19:57:57 UTC
Aw... Thank you! This story kind of got away from me and Dean as well. lol So glad you enjoyed it.

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unplugged32 September 18 2011, 17:34:50 UTC
Adorable and very sweet:)

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dreamlitnight September 18 2011, 19:59:03 UTC
Thank you! Glad you found it enjoyable.

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embroiderama September 18 2011, 18:56:29 UTC
So much love for this! I love that Dean's confusion takes such a specific shape.

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dreamlitnight September 18 2011, 20:02:02 UTC
Appreciate the love! And Dean's confusion was a surprise to me, it went a little off course to what I had intended, but that's the nature of the Winchesters.... always surprising, going their own way. lol Thank you!

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maypoles September 18 2011, 21:21:44 UTC
Nice! I loved Dean's disoriented POV.

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