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dreaming_col

[fic] A Birthday Story

Feb 18, 2010 16:04

Title: A Birthday Story
Author: dreaming_col
Rating: PG
Pairing: none
Genre: general, somewhere between humor and fluff (maybe? At least, that's what was intended... O_o)
Prompt Challenges: from my friend Tia: handcuffs, lipstick; from feyla: pirates; from kratynoi: killer automatic doors, teddy bears
Notes: Originally for the Make a Wish Contest. Umm... VERY ( Read more... )

one-shot, fiction

Comments 29

chdairkld March 1 2010, 21:16:01 UTC

this was such a feel good story!! i enjoyed it very very much, just reading how they interact normally, just boys being friends. i swear i'm not jaemin biased! hahahha. i love the soulfighter moment though.

i miss reading them like this.

thanks!

dreaming_col March 1 2010, 21:18:31 UTC

Yeah, I'm not JaeMin biased either. Really. They just happen to sneak into every single fic I write. O_O Lol!

Aww, well, I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^^

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dreaming_col March 1 2010, 22:56:32 UTC

Like Min said to Junsu, they ended up bringing out the "real" him. ^^
Lol! Well, maybe they did use them. I'll leave that up to you to decide/imagine. ^_~
Min's adorable when he's frustrated, isn't he? XDDD

emda March 1 2010, 23:42:47 UTC

I knew you wrote this!!!!!
really good story!!!!!

dreaming_col March 2 2010, 00:01:36 UTC

^_____^ Well, I'm glad you know me that well. XD

Thank you, dear~! ♥

narcolept_smurf March 1 2010, 23:59:55 UTC

YES I KNEW IT WAS YOU!!!! Back when I read this the first time I thought, this is Ashley. I didn't get time to go back over stuff before you posted it though T_T But I knew it!!! XD

dreaming_col March 2 2010, 00:02:28 UTC

XDDD I figured if anyone did, you would. Even if it is a drastically different... tone than I usually write. ^_^

narcolept_smurf March 2 2010, 00:17:01 UTC

The tone was definitely different but there are certain lines and especially the way you wrote Min and Jae that are similar to how you've written them previously.

dreaming_col March 2 2010, 00:47:50 UTC

Yeah, Min and Jae are pretty solid characters in my mind. I don't know that they'll ever change very much when I write them. Probably a bit of a downfall. *shrugs*
And I totally wrote 'downFAIL' the first time. Why, yes, I WILL create my own new slang words. XD

But, yeah, I thought the completely random angsty drama moment thrown in the middle of the silly fluff would kinda give me away. I think I'm completely incapable of writing a full story with some kind of drama... XD

Thread 10

kireny March 2 2010, 02:38:04 UTC

tkae 2:
this was so good! I loved seeing Changmin move from shy to snarky. I'm a Jaemin fan, not a big one but Jae & min in this were so cute and I loved it.
Also loved the others being their dorky selves as well.

so deleted the first comment cause I messed it up. Someone needs to take away my post comments ability when I've just taken medicine for a cold, idk why I wrote that.

kireny March 2 2010, 02:38:20 UTC

...take*

dreaming_col March 2 2010, 02:56:30 UTC

Yeah, I was really happy when Minnie's evolution came across just the way I wanted it to. Thought I'd have to fight more with it, but it worked out. ^^
I love my JaeMin. They always seem to work themselves into every fic I write, whether as an actual couple or just friends but still. They're allllllways there. XD

Lol! Yeah, cold medicine can mess a person up, really. :D Hope you feel better soon, at least. ^^

kireny March 2 2010, 04:27:22 UTC

It came across really really well, they are so cute in this. I love all their "fighting" and one touch love and this fic really showed that really nicely.

lol, definitely. i looked at the first comment and was like wtf did I write. aw thank you, its like the tail end of the cold, so hopefully soon