I have no idea what possessed me to read this, but I'm glad I did. You did a great job with all this, it was really believable. Poor Cordy though, she would take the hard road.
Your Eve voice is spot-on. Slick and seductive and everything you've ever wanted to hear, and so very convincing...
And Cordy. Oh, Cordy. Was just perfect. Ripping the paper, seeing through Eve's bullshit - completely IC with the woman Cordy was meant to grow into.
And the seduction...wonderfully done, love. Very sexy.
Oh! And the way Cordy sees Angel... He's the hero, and we so often see him swinging his sword and skewering the demons, strong and uncompromising...the warrior. And through Cordy's eyes, you've shown us his vulnerable side. *sniffle*
I'm so glad! I've never written Eve before but it was a lot of fun, creating an argument for why Cordy outta stick around. -sniff- Just like I wanted her to..
And Cordy. Oh, Cordy. Was just perfect..completely IC with the woman Cordy was meant to grow into.
-squash- Thank you hunny! I wanted to make her human enough to be tempted, but have her heroic streak come out in the end. I'm glad the combo seemed Cordy-esque to you.
And the seduction...wonderfully done, love. Very sexy.
-blushes-
Oh! And the way Cordy sees Angel...you've shown us his vulnerable side. *sniffle*
I always loved the Cordy Angel interaction, they were suck dorks around one another. Funny, snarky, cuddly dorks.
Okay, that made me cry. Mentions of Doyle tend to do that, not to mention my absolute and utter love for Cordelia, which drove me to read this, even though I normally stay away from slash and femslash. But it was so good! I love the way you portrayed Cordy. I think about what she could have been thinking during her last moments a lot (I write fanfic too, and I deal with that time period a lot because I can't help but fix certain things...) and I think you were dead-on, no pun intended. Very enjoyable.
I'm glad! Er, well, not that you're crying, but that it evoked some emotion n'..oh, you know what I mean. -hands you a tissue-
Mentions of Doyle tend to do that, not to mention my absolute and utter love for Cordelia
Yeah, talk of Doyle definitely gives me the sniffles, and I do love that Cordy.
I deal with that time period a lot because I can't help but fix certain things
I definitely understand that. This is the only fic I've written that is pre her death, but I've written two featuring Cordelia in the afterlife - one with Doyle that might tickle your fancy - just because her death was so bloody terrible..I had to throw in some afterlife antics to smooth it out!
I normally stay away from slash and femslash. But it was so good!
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, even if it wasn't your norm.
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Your Eve voice is spot-on. Slick and seductive and everything you've ever wanted to hear, and so very convincing...
And Cordy. Oh, Cordy. Was just perfect. Ripping the paper, seeing through Eve's bullshit - completely IC with the woman Cordy was meant to grow into.
And the seduction...wonderfully done, love. Very sexy.
Oh! And the way Cordy sees Angel... He's the hero, and we so often see him swinging his sword and skewering the demons, strong and uncompromising...the warrior. And through Cordy's eyes, you've shown us his vulnerable side. *sniffle*
Well done, honey!
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-licks you all over-
Your Eve voice is spot-on.
I'm so glad! I've never written Eve before but it was a lot of fun, creating an argument for why Cordy outta stick around. -sniff- Just like I wanted her to..
And Cordy. Oh, Cordy. Was just perfect..completely IC with the woman Cordy was meant to grow into.
-squash- Thank you hunny! I wanted to make her human enough to be tempted, but have her heroic streak come out in the end. I'm glad the combo seemed Cordy-esque to you.
And the seduction...wonderfully done, love. Very sexy.
-blushes-
Oh! And the way Cordy sees Angel...you've shown us his vulnerable side. *sniffle*
I always loved the Cordy Angel interaction, they were suck dorks around one another. Funny, snarky, cuddly dorks.
Well done, honey!
Thank you! -smooches- You're such a doll.
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"She gestured absently towards several other, presumably evil Wolfram and Hart employee’s who’s heels clicked as they passed by the room, "
"who's" should be "whose"
*smooch*
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I'm glad! Er, well, not that you're crying, but that it evoked some emotion n'..oh, you know what I mean. -hands you a tissue-
Mentions of Doyle tend to do that, not to mention my absolute and utter love for Cordelia
Yeah, talk of Doyle definitely gives me the sniffles, and I do love that Cordy.
I deal with that time period a lot because I can't help but fix certain things
I definitely understand that. This is the only fic I've written that is pre her death, but I've written two featuring Cordelia in the afterlife - one with Doyle that might tickle your fancy - just because her death was so bloody terrible..I had to throw in some afterlife antics to smooth it out!
I normally stay away from slash and femslash. But it was so good!
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, even if it wasn't your norm.
Thanks again for the kind words. :D
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The username and URL listed are perfect. No changes needed.
I emailed you as well, just in case.
Thanks again!
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