Fic: Trotter

[dreamflower02]

Well, I have only eight weeks to get this story written and posted, so I had better not waste any time. So, here behind the cut is the prologue to my new story, "Trotter"

Prologue: An Unexpected Discovery

Comments

[claudia603]

well, this sounds intriguing! I can't wait to see what the story is behind Trotter!

[dreamflower02]

It won't be long! I have a deadline! *whoosh*wipes forehead*goes back to writing madly*

[labourslamp]

*jumps up and down squeeeeeeeeeeeing*

I love the detail of the made-for-hobbit apartments--and the fact that they have a history!

More please.

Brief nitpick: As far as I can tell, the language is "Quenya," not "Quenyan," which seems to be a bit of an Anglicization. This is not to say that the language name wouldn't have gotten Westronized--it may have, in which case your use of it is legitimate. If someone else reads this with better information, feel free to contradict me.

[dreamflower02]

Oh dear. Okay, let us say that it is Westronized at least when Bilbo is speaking and thinking in Westron! Otherwise, I have several stories I will need to go back and edit, and I am not sure I can remember them all. *facepalm*

I am not, and never have been, an expert in the Elven languages. *sigh*

And now that I think of it, you've given me another bunny.

[labourslamp]

Another bunny! YES! *cackles*

[addie71]

Oh this has a very interesting beginning!

[dreamflower02]

Thanks! I hope it remains interesting!

[blslarner]

I, too, look forward to learning more. A wonderful beginning!

[dreamflower02]

Thank you! The beginning is the easy part, of course! But I have a good head start on it, and I think I can keep ahead of myself to the end if all goes well!

[shirebound]

I'm most intrigued!!

[dreamflower02]

*grin* I'm glad. A Prologue does need a certain amount of intrigue...