Sheer Dumb Luck 5

[dream_it_all]

Sheer Dumb Luck
Part Five
By Dreaming of Everything AKA dream_it_all AKA dreams_of_all, betaed by mmouse15
Series: Transformers 2007
Ratings/Warnings: M for sex and possible language, plus sexual themes. Warnings for multiple partner scenes and themes, plug-and-play, slash. Updated G1 characters.
Characters/Pairings: Ratchet, Constructicons, Ratchet/Constructicons. (Yes, all of

Comments

[dream_it_all]

Yaaay!!! Sooo good you're not disappointed! ...It was a fairly uneventful chapter. actually. o.o

As certain answers are revealed, more questions appear that keep me wondering.

Eeeee :D :D :D This is good because I am always afraid that I am making things ridiculously too obvious. (Except for sometimes when I think I'm making things ridiculously too obscure... >.>) But plots need something to keep you guessing, and--yay!

This time I'm very curious about Mixmaster - before, I was just curious how and when he'd make his appearance, and now that he has, my brain is trying to come up with why his "brothers" and Ratchet are so wary of him; also, what's up with his speech.

Mixmaster is totally my favorite. Except that Bonecrusher is more fun to write. And Scavenger is more adorable. And I identify more with Scrapper, except for the "crazy" bit. And Hook is so ridiculous that you can't help but love him. Okay, maybe I like them all, but Mixmaster is way, way up there. Like I might have mentioned, he shows up a lot more in the eventual

[dream_it_all]

...Dang, messed up my HTML. D: Sorry about that!

(And because I forgot--would you mind if I friended you?)

[pennieblack]

Oh!

Now that you mentioned it, I went back and compared the original TFC version to this. The italics really do make a difference in some of the passages.
“That’s just stupid. What do you think I am, a Decepticon? And I’m a medic. How stable are these?” as compared to “That’s just stupid. What do you think I am, a Decepticon? And I’m a medic. How stable are these?”..

It's interesting, going back in and catching the differences in emphasis. (:

[dream_it_all]

Yay! I work hard at my italics--seriously, even if it just looks like rampant abuse on occasion--so I'm glad they make as much of a difference to other people as they do to me.

Actually, that phrase you used as an example in particular is one of the things that bothered me most about where the italics got stripped out. >.> Most of them are inconsequential little differences, but that phrase just reads as wrong without the italics in there.

[tainry]

“He can’t feel you waiting,” Scrapper said shortly, briefly looking up from what he’d been working on. “Or tell you’re there.”
Ooooh! Telling little details again. Nice! <3
Eeeeee! Looking forward to more cuddly Constructicons!

[dream_it_all]

Thank you! :D I do my best to get those little clues in! X3

...Cuddly Constructicons are pretty much my favorite thing ever. >.> It's true! I just love them to little itty-bitty pieces. One of the main reasons I am probably going to write a sequel to this (and one of the main features of said sequel) is cuddly Constructions. They are just awdorable!

[kyra_neko_rei]

Very interesting. Glad to see the update.

Mixmaster should prove to be interesting. Yay, tactile Scavenger!

[dream_it_all]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it!

Mixmaster is probably my favorite. Scavenger is a close second, though! He is a cuddler. >.>

[okami_myrrhibis]

Interesting that MM causes trepidation in his teammates, as well as Ratchet... and the comment about glitches...

I like this series a lot!

[dream_it_all]

Thank you so much!

Mixmaster is, as you have guessed, a mystery right now. One that will be resolved, but still! Actually, now I'm really excited about the eventual reveal. ^_^