a lyric to one of my bands songs

[dravenashton]

"Stuggle Of The Commons"

Hopelessness yet again reigning supreme
Surrounded by gloom and shame this misery

Searching but not free too blind to have ever seen
This is not a lie but truth you cannot deny
Failing and fragile you hope for some release
But with the crutch you have you can never lean
Broken and afraid on this bed that you will now lay
Looking for any peace begging screaming for mercy

Now you think that this is over
But you know that you’re never free

Sitting in a shell callous to the world
Reminding myself that I must endue
Knowing that my struggle will continue on
For somewhere out there must be a cure
Must be a cure

(solo)

Sitting and waiting you now find yourself
No better or worse but going nowhere

You are so distant from all that you see
In others around you who seem so happy
But this is not something you know how to change
For you am in prison and they are still free
Getting closer to one another all appears so fine
Now that the veil is lifted we can finally dine

This is but a common struggle
That really all mankind will share
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thoughts?