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Raindrops Pinnacle

Jul 27, 2010 21:21

Title: Raindrops Pinnacle
Author: azura_caelestis
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 829 words
Notes/Warning: Finally, it's the first time I write a fan fiction in English, so I'm sorry if there any mistakes here.

( Our Love Story was Such Romeo & Juliet that Never Ends at a Beautiful Life )

azura_caelestis, 501-1499

Comments 8

alexia_drake July 27 2010, 16:32:45 UTC

I think you should find a beta to help you with your mistakes in English, since it's not your first language. You may ask at the community dramione if it would be mostly for fanfics on that couple.

Also, I added your username in the tags.

azura_caelestis July 27 2010, 23:14:45 UTC

thanks for the help and the suggestion :D
it's really help me.
actually, I've posted this fan fic on [info]dramione but someone there suggested me to post here.

alexia_drake July 27 2010, 23:33:56 UTC

I did not meant to re-post your fanfic on dramione but but post there to ask for a Beta. You can see exemples of that kind of posts here.

starduchess July 30 2010, 21:01:40 UTC

Even with the grammar mistakes, I could still understand what was happening. The whole piece had a mushy atmosphere just like the fog in the story. The differences in their stations is just as suffocating as the wet air. A good piece that would be great with just a little editing.

I am willing to beta any future drabbles. Just PM me!

azura_caelestis July 31 2010, 00:38:32 UTC

OOHH! Thank you...
Your words are so amazing XDD
I think there's no one here want to read this fiction :(

WOW! Really?
Actually, I have an english drabble, but the cast is Korean singer. Is it okay? Or you're only betaing the Dramione fan fic? O.o

starduchess July 31 2010, 18:24:44 UTC

This comm has actually been very quiet lately. No one's even posted their 100 word drabbles from the last two months of dmhgchallenge, myself included. (I should remedy that.)

Yes, really, I've been doing it for cumoli who's Japanese over at hp_slash. I mostly meant your Dramione or other HP drabbles. If you write in other fandoms, I might not be able to tell what you are talking about!

azura_caelestis August 1 2010, 04:48:24 UTC

Oh, really?
I'm new here...so I a little bit late of information *LOL*

Okay then.
I'll visit your journal sometimes. I visited there yesterday and it seems great!

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