Declaration of Intent

[greenschist]

Title: Declaration of Intent
Author: greenschist
Rating: PG
Word Count: 850
Summary: "If I have to spend the rest of my life without you, it's not going to be because I was too cowardly to make my move."
Warning: Some Hermione/Ron (but not for long, I think. -_^)
Notes: Prompt #22 "Got invited to the Christmas party by mistake. Who knew?" --Die Hard. Hope

Comments

[luciannamalfoy]

This was so beautifully brave of Draco! Go Draco!!! *smiles*

[hanako_no_yume]

I liked this one a lot. Of course I was rooting for Draco, but at the same time, am not so sure that insulting all of Hermione's friends is the best way to go about winning her heart. Not that that would ever stop him. ^_^

[drcjsnider]

OMG... I was hoping for snarky and instead I got heart-stoppingly lovely and wonderful!! seriously this is such a GREAT draco. I wish you would turn this into a full blown fic just because i'm so enamoured with the personality you created for him.

My favorite lines:

- “Ministry's Yule Ball?” Draco looked around in exaggerated confusion. “You mean this isn't the Death Eater reunion and pancake breakfast?”

- If I have to spend the rest of my life without you, it's not going to be because I was too cowardly to make my move
- Draco punched the air once in triumph and then slipped his hands into his pockets, meandering after her and whistling a waltz under his breath. (This last one is my favorite becuase it is by NO MEANS a victory, but Draco's reaction is just the kind that would make any girl's heart flutter.)

[heart5]

*wants more*

i'm in love with this draco already. romantic,-in-love!draco rocks!

this was just precious: "“Ah, Hermione, there you are.” Draco sat down next to Hermione and rested his hand on her leg, shoving Ron Weasley's hand aside to do so." lol :)

[greatestheroine]

let's see what happens to that one dance... hope it leads to a whole lot more! ;p

happy holidays! :)