Planning

[pokecharm]

Title: Planning
Author: pokecharm
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 517
Notes/Warning: post-DH epilogue, 8 - ‘Beautiful muffin for a beautiful lady.’

Comments

[luciannamalfoy]

Wow, this was a very thought-provoking piece! So real-life like as marriages ever so often don't work. Makes me want to know what is next. Good job!

[pokecharm]

well, this is part of a partially finished fic I've been writing since last year, the beginning is almost all H/G, but D/Hr came in and I am trying to integrate the two storylines into one story :) I think it's just you and me here right now :p

[greenschist]

Rose/Scorpius! *squees and dies happy*

I really loved the interaction between Hermione and Draco here. There's such a sense of something new about to begin--all Hermione has to do is take that first step and she'll start to fall. The idea of being unhappily married but still committed is very realistic, and I think Hermione, in particular, would believe she could overcome any issue in her marriage if she thinks it through and works hard enough.

Draco's right, though: it really takes two.

[pokecharm]

I have a couple fics where they play one of the minor romantic couples, I always saw them together after I read the epilogue ;)

I see that too - it's so Hermione. She'll ignore it if Ron's cheating or just being an idiot because she thinks it has to work. I look forward to, if I ever find time, to really writing a full-length fic where we see her realise how wrong Ron is for her and how right Draco is.

[drcjsnider]

Oh wow... I really enjoy this :) Nice job... wouldn't mind seeing more of it :)

[pokecharm]

ah, that's encouraging :) thanks!

[telperaca]

I love the under the tone message that came to mind after reading this drabble. I can really imagine this scene, staying true to the epilogue. And very in character to the way Jo wrote them. *nods*
:D

[pokecharm]

thank you - I have always tried to keep their relationship as true to what JKR has given us and it is always a challenge!