A Good Breeze

Oct 12, 2007 20:31

Title: A Good Breeze
Author: chocolateveela
Rating: PG
Word Count: 100
Notes/Warning: Chocolateveela, 100


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drcjsnider October 13 2007, 00:37:44 UTC
OMG... seriously LOL! The last line is a classic!

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chocolateveela October 13 2007, 00:42:19 UTC
LOL, thanks...it just came to me. The phrase 'going commando' is just funny to me.

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artsy_aura October 13 2007, 00:58:38 UTC
Yeah, the last line: priceless. ^_^

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artsy_aura October 13 2007, 01:06:40 UTC
BTW, I love your name! ^_~

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chocolateveela October 13 2007, 01:22:02 UTC
LOL thanks

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alexia_drake October 13 2007, 03:42:24 UTC
True, the last line is funny, but my favorite is:
I like my dress robes, my boy bits get a good breeze.
... )

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chocolateveela October 13 2007, 18:01:21 UTC
Yeah this one I wrote at work in about 10 minutes. So I'm really pleased that you like it!

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elvishly October 13 2007, 12:27:37 UTC
Hahahaha, I loved that. <3

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chocolateveela October 13 2007, 18:04:18 UTC
Thanks so much!

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THANKS chocolateveela October 14 2007, 14:19:44 UTC
Thanks to whoever nominated this! I was very surprised and pleased!!!

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