seriously?
"As she offered him her neck, Draco couldn't help but become intoxcated by the scent of Hermione's strawberry bodywash."
I reallly reallly realllllllly can't stand when an author describes Hermione's body wash as some detailed mix of aromas. OR even worse is when she's in the shower "lathering her loofah with cucumber melon/sensual amber/night blooming jasmin body wash, something she picked up at a muggle store-- what was it called again? Oh yes, BATH AND BODY WORKS, which had quickly become her favourite."
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I reallly reallly realllllllly can't stand when an author describes Hermione's body wash as some detailed mix of aromas. OR even worse is when she's in the shower "lathering her loofah with cucumber melon/sensual amber/night blooming jasmin body wash, something she picked up at a muggle store-- what was it called again? Oh yes, BATH AND BODY WORKS, which had quickly become her favourite."
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