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001. Snow - Hermione Granger (Harry Potter)

Mar 07, 2007 16:37

Title: Unexpected Fall
Prompt/Number: 001. Snow
Rating: PG
Character/Fandom: Hermione Granger/Harry Potter
Word Count: 513

( Unexpected Fall )

prompt response:hermioneg

Comments 8

spideypeter March 7 2007, 23:02:55 UTC

Oh! I really, really liked this. You really drew on her pain of missing her friends. The last line was killer. Good job!

hermionesmagic March 8 2007, 01:51:14 UTC

Thanks so much, Maddie! I was working on the last line when the title came to be and everything fell into place. I'm glad it worked!

dean_w March 7 2007, 23:08:10 UTC

I don't read much HP fic, but I know the books, and I loved the nostalgia of this. It was sad, but it was more bittersweet, and I enjoyed this read quite a bit.

Great job!

hermionesmagic March 8 2007, 01:53:35 UTC

Aw! Thanks so much! I've never written much HP fic beside a short piece or two, so I'm glad that this works. I wouldn't imagine that after what they've been through and will go through, life will be easy for them.

fullmoondestiny March 7 2007, 23:18:09 UTC

This was wonderful, Lara! Poor Hermione though. :-(

hermionesmagic March 8 2007, 01:54:52 UTC

Thanks so much, sweetie. Poor Hermione has been through a lot. All of them have.

gimpy_doctor March 9 2007, 04:42:30 UTC

Awwwww, poor angsty Hermione! :(

lilspencer March 9 2007, 16:33:43 UTC

Poor Hermione. :(

Great job! :)