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Aug 20, 2009 19:37

TITLE: First Time for Everything
AUTHOR: Dragynflies
RATING: NC 17
AUTHOR'S NOTE: Written for perdiccas for the Heroes_Exchange
SUMMARY: Takes place during Villians. Gabriel's first time. Oral sex, anal play, sex...Elle likes to teach Gabriel all the fun stuff.

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catyuy August 21 2009, 01:00:14 UTC

Love it

dragynflies August 21 2009, 02:28:42 UTC

Thank you:)

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dragynflies August 21 2009, 02:28:51 UTC

Yay! Thank you so much.

stefichan August 21 2009, 01:32:01 UTC

Elle knows all the good tricks!

I love how inexperienced Gabriel is, how he kinda tries, and feels guilty afterward. Well. Before getting all sleepy anyway. Poor guy, lol.

Loved it <3

dragynflies August 21 2009, 02:30:38 UTC

I'm glad you like it! Thank you for the lovely compliment.

disalae August 21 2009, 01:57:05 UTC

Oh, Gabriel. So delightfully and realistically awkward and the fact that he starts to fall asleep, HA. Reminds me of some people I used to know - but I digress. And I love the last line.

dragynflies August 21 2009, 02:39:35 UTC

LMAO, reminds me of some people I used to know too. Oh, awkward.

Thank you so much for commenting, I"m glad you liked it.

perdiccas August 21 2009, 02:10:14 UTC

Squee! This is so HOT! Omg, thank you! Even more than the assplay (so sexy!) and the flaccid cock bj (fave thing ever and I don't think I even listed it in my CEO orders, you psychic!), I LOVELOVELOVELOVE Elle teaching Gabriel what to do. Seriously, the hottest thing ever. ♥

There’s supposed to be a wedding first, and he can’t help but picture Elle in a white dress, her hair curled around her pretty face.
I adore this image and I love guilty, still kinda religious!Gabriel.

Gabriel feels like a clock wound too tightly, like every touch of her fingers is a twist of the gears, and Elle just keeps twisting until he’s going to explode.
This is a gorgeous sentence. <3

It’s too much for him and he comes before he even feels his balls tighten; there’s no warning at all, just soaked underwear and Elle’s surprised face.
TOO HOT! OMG! BEST PREMATURE EJACULATION SCENE EVER!

I'm not gonna quote the whole bj/fingering scene because it would be everything. Srsly, all absolute perfection!

Okay, wait, I have to quote this bit: “That’s…I don’t ( ... )

dragynflies August 21 2009, 02:33:19 UTC

YAY FOR THE BEST COMMENT EVER THANK YOU SO MUCH.

I'm so glad you liked it. It got kind of schmoopy at the end, but...well, that's the best I can do right now LOL.

You know, I wrote the clock line before I remembered he was a watchmaker. And then I was kind of delighted at myself, LOL.

Thanks again for the great comment :) :)