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mekina July 3 2012, 00:18:51 UTC
If this were by anyone else I seriously doubt I even would have looked at it twice. I don't like Destiel at all, and I'm not a fan of Castiel. But I love your writing, so I'm giving it a chance, and I'm so glad I did, because it's fantastic so far!

Dean clung to his brother like others clung to faith-Sam was Dean’s faith, his hope and salvation-and Sam revered Dean for it.

Oh, boys. This sentence is perfection, it's everything, and describes them so well. The way they love each other, it's so messed up, so twisted and yet...weirdly, um, pure at the same time? Not the right word, but I hope you get what I mean. Their loyalty and love for each other is mindblowing, and it makes me stop and go, "Right. That's why I write and read about these two. Because of that bond."

Eep, Dean's dream. I knew right away that was related to whatever they were hunting when Sutter mentioned laughter. Bleh, creepy. (Also, the image of the garden gnomes going after Dean was hilarious. I envisioned them headbutting him in the groin with their pointy little hats!)

Words, lately, only messed things up, got between them

*sigh* S4 was so painful (especially the last scene in When The Levee Breaks, I can't watch that without getting teary) and this sums it up so perfectly.

I'm so in awe of your writing right now. *skips to part 2*

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dragonspell January 1 2013, 01:29:52 UTC
I'm glad that you took a chance on this. I started writing this because I wanted to write"wincest that is all about Castiel" and I wanted to deal with the issues in season 4, how Dean made this miraculous return from Hell and how Sam wanted to treat him like he was made of glass. I like the character of Castiel and I like the sparks he has with Dean on the show though I'm not a D/Cer.

I'm so glad you liked that sentence! I love that sentence. It was one of the ones that I tried to build the fic around.

I don't know why I have such an issue with gnomes. This is the second story that I've mentioned them being monsters in. XD

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