That was an AWESOME twist at the end. I suspected Nick almost immediately, what with bonding with Dean over the car, and the flirting, but I thought he was going to be the Big Bad, not a hired killer. And the motivation, too, with the lover exacting revenge - except the lover was supernatural! :D
And the, uh, panties. I liked the panties, too. ;)
=D Thank you! I was really hoping to keep people guessing who the "bad guy" was up to the end. I'm glad to see that Nick worked. Originally, he wasn't going to even be a bad guy but that just kind of changed when I wrote the fic.
Great story you have written! I have to say I find it very original and it's obvious you thought it through because it was also well written! I liked everything about it, the ust between Sam and Dean, the mysteries and the general creepyness. All white houses? Evil must be close! :)
Thank you so much! I'm glad that you liked it! Re: evil: Hee. I know that's what I thing when I see hundreds of white houses all lined up in neat orderly rows.
AWESOME ENDING!! really fucking good! Man, have I ever enjoyed reading this story, there was so much cool stuff to love and all of it beautifully written with the best parts being the SamNDean stuff. ♥
A hand landed on Sam’s thigh, warm and heavy, and Sam jumped. “Or we could go inside and you could fuck me and we’ll say it’s our first.” Sam stared at Dean, dumbfounded, and silence settled between them. Dean squirmed, dropping his head. “If you want,” he added.
It was an invitation that Sam couldn’t refuse. He leaned across the car and pressed a soft, hesitant kiss to Dean’s lips-not that Dean left it that way. Dean pushed Sam backward, opening his mouth to deepen the kiss and Sam obliged him.
Now they've got a teddy to play around with too! GUH.
THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU BB LOVELY for being so incredibly awesome, my love for this is huge and despite what you say I think this IS one of your best stories! ♥♥♥
I really wanted to keep the whole anniversary thing throughout it. XD
Haha, yes! Teddies.
=D Thank you again, June. This story has so much of my insecurities packed into it because I can see a lot of the flaws in it but I just didn't have time to fix them (this story was rewritten about three times--most of the draft that I submitted for the May 1st deadline having been tossed out with the bathwater).
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And the, uh, panties. I liked the panties, too. ;)
Thank you for sharing!
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Hee. I like panties too.
Thank you again!
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Thanks for sharing the story, it was great!
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A hand landed on Sam’s thigh, warm and heavy, and Sam jumped. “Or we could go inside and you could fuck me and we’ll say it’s our first.” Sam stared at Dean, dumbfounded, and silence settled between them. Dean squirmed, dropping his head. “If you want,” he added.
It was an invitation that Sam couldn’t refuse. He leaned across the car and pressed a soft, hesitant kiss to Dean’s lips-not that Dean left it that way. Dean pushed Sam backward, opening his mouth to deepen the kiss and Sam obliged him.
Now they've got a teddy to play around with too! GUH.
THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU BB LOVELY for being so incredibly awesome, my love for this is huge and despite what you say I think this IS one of your best stories! ♥♥♥
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I really wanted to keep the whole anniversary thing throughout it. XD
Haha, yes! Teddies.
=D Thank you again, June. This story has so much of my insecurities packed into it because I can see a lot of the flaws in it but I just didn't have time to fix them (this story was rewritten about three times--most of the draft that I submitted for the May 1st deadline having been tossed out with the bathwater).
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Apart from the serious hotness of Dean in panties (and omg...a teddy!) this story was awesome! Nice plot, even nicer plot twist :)
I like when Sam knew Dean would "geek out" about the whole hidden passage thing, so cute.
Also...Dean in panties. Unf.
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Thank you so much! I'm glad that you liked it!
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