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vodou_blue December 1 2010, 04:24:36 UTC
Ferngully! Yay! Total bonus points for the Ferngully reference! *high-fives you*

Yeah, why wasn’t that a valid question? How come not everything Jensen drew is animated and in existence somewhere? Although the disembodied penises would be pretty weird. *snicker*

I want a toaster that plays techno music too! But not one with a car engine, though. *giggles*

I literally LOL’d when Chad went, “Hm, that’s not good,” and kicked the machine. I can envision the scene so clearly -- you’ve done a magnificent job describing it.

Interesting that Ross is Jensen’s desired qualities, but also his anger. Cool!

Okay, Ross jumping him in the alley? Now that’s narcissistic. (kinda awesome, actually *snicker*) Narcissistic of Ross, I mean. Although I get the ‘touching your creator’ part, too ( ... )

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dragonspell December 2 2010, 12:38:55 UTC
xD I loved the Ferngully reference! I'm glad that you did to! I was a total geek and high-fived myself for thinking of it but I'll totally high-five you, too!

To be honest, it's mostly because I didn't want to deal with the logistics and rules but I think a lot of it had to do with intent and character and all that. =D Jensen was just picturing a bunch of penises dancing around and totally coming after him.

Yeah, a car engine would be a bit much. xD Probably pretty noisy, too!

Thank you about the machine part! I kept having to go back in and work on it, trying to draw out the scene and explain exactly what's making Jensen freak out.

Everything that Jensen was too afraid to be.

Narcissistic is two ways! xD Because Ross basically wants to fuck himself but there's got to be a bit of Jensen that made him that way, right?

=D Thank you! Oh, and I know. Hi, JDM. ♥♥♥

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deadflowers5 January 9 2011, 18:49:38 UTC
"Ross basically wants to fuck himself" You added new meaning of 'go fuck yourself' :-)

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big_heart_june December 2 2010, 17:53:10 UTC
OMG ROSS! what a mind fuck! and N'AWWWWWW, I LOVE THE PEAS, ESPECIALLY THE CUTE LIL' PEA WITH THE TINY GLASSES AND TRIANGLE! SO CUTE! And OMG, JAAAAAARED. LOVELOVELOVE. He's always so damn sexy and sweet in your fic. ♥♥♥ also, Chad and JDM!

YOU are amazing, BB!!!! ♥

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dragonspell December 3 2010, 13:46:56 UTC
Hee! I loved Ross. I loved the rather...I don't know, anti!Jensen of him in the fic ( ... )

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angeblond December 3 2010, 01:55:32 UTC
I could just picture the machine, remembering "Back to the future", it's just the professor's house.

What called me is the statement about "i love you" when Jensen hate himself, projecting his wants in Ross, it seems for me that Ross should despised him for being the weak self Jensen is.

Oh by the way, i don't know to which the little guy want to grow in? Jeff, Ross, Jared or Jensen? If Jared or Jensen, i can just wish the same.

Beautiful.

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dragonspell December 3 2010, 13:51:56 UTC
Yeah, that's it exactly! =D I really wanted Chad's entirely apartment to be taken over by this big, sprawling, mostly useless piece of machinery! =D

I think that Jensen projected who he wanted to be in Ross, which, yeah, means that Jensen doesn't necessarily like who he is but I don't think that Ross feels the same way because Ross doesn't want a rival. Ross is manipulative. He likes people that he can control. Jensen being "weaker" than he is, therefore, makes him perfect. Plus the whole creator angle. But, yeah, definitely, I see your point. It's a direction that I really could have taken Ross in.

xD The pea wanted to grow up to be cop!Jeff. I think he just liked Jeff's cool attitude and easy way with a gun. =P

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angeblond December 3 2010, 14:53:18 UTC
I'm not in gunfire weaponry, more a blades fan, particularly flesh spears as interesting as Jared's.

So not a cop for me^^.

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valoryhope December 4 2010, 06:36:03 UTC
On one hand, this whole thing was ridiculous but, on the other, it was also kind of…incredible? In a really over the top kind of way

A perfect description for this entire fic! I'm in awe of your imagination and creativity, as well as your artistic talent. Just...wow.

Amazing.

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dragonspell December 4 2010, 23:20:00 UTC
=D Thank you so much! I'm glad that you liked it!

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sadritsuka12 December 12 2010, 21:51:30 UTC
P.P POOR JENSEN HE GOT ATTACK YAY JARD HELP JENSEN. .THANK GOD..

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dragonspell December 16 2010, 14:22:10 UTC
Yeah, he did. =( But his alter ego, no less. But Jared was there! \o/ =D

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