#80 - Rule number seven - And so life goes on - charlies_dragon - Supernatural

[charlies_dragon]

Title: And so life goes on
Fandom: Supernatural
Prompt: #80 - Rule number seven
Word Count: 1105
Warnings: everything up to 2x22 - All Hell Breaks Loose part2
Rating: umm...PG-13 for a small amount of bad language
Summary: It's about 80 years after the events of All Hell Breaks Loose part 2, and things aren't going so well for planet Earth.

Comments

[thismaz]

Clever retelling. Interesting to see a different perspective on the events. And interesting to see how those perspectives work, for someone who has to live with the consequences.
Nice.

Couple of little typos:
look like they did when they're [their] pictures
now a days - I think should be one word?

[charlies_dragon]

Thanks hun :) I've seen lots of fics that tell how Dean and Sam became evil and so on, but not too many that dealt with the aftermath of it, and even fewer from a non hunters' perspective, so I thought "why the hell not?" and took a stab at it. I'm glad you like it even though it's not quite the normal way of going about a Supernatural fic.

Oops! Sorry for the typo's - I wonder how both Word and I missed them? Thanks for pointing them out, though I'm not too sure about 'now a days', it looks a bit wrong both ways.

charlies_dragon

[weaselett]

very interesting - a few little typos -

his brothers life - should be brother's
doesn't meant - should be mean
being not alone - not being alone
working from more - working more from
wincchesters' - doesn't need the '

tis good hun *nods* - a very interesting take - and a very bleak idea of what could still be..... :)

[charlies_dragon]

Thanks for pointing out the errors - how Word and I missed them I'll never know! *goes off to sort out*

Yeah, I was kinda going for slightly bleak, and then this came along and went very bleak, but there's some hope in there too (I hope!).

They've gotta get Dean outta the deal, but whether either of them'll still be recognisable as "Dean" or "Sammy" once Dean's been 'saved' is another matter entirely *shivers*

charlies_dragon

[sparrow2000]

Very, very nicely done, hon. It's always so interesting to get another perspective on events. Very nice voice from the observer, you really got inside their head.

[charlies_dragon]

Thanks hun *hugs* I was going for a different slant on what could happen and I like how it turned out and I'm so glad you like it too.

Sorry for not replying before this, but LJ obviously decided not to tell me you'd left me a comment *glares at LJ*

charlies_dragon