First Victim
Story: Evil is Contagious
Actual Summary: How the school's toughest group got started. Members are Yami Marik, Yami Bakura and Seto Kaiba. Of Course all group needs a Queen.
My Summary: A Mary-Sue comes to Japan! Only it's not Japan because everyone acts American. Within the first, proper grammar less, chapter she has Yami Marik, Yami Bakura and Seto Kaiba bowing down to her. She also causes everyone to lose their personality... oh dear Kaiba voluntarily let someone borrow his car keys. Wait! Since when does he drive, he's only 16! (I know the rules are different in Japan but still!)
Mary-Sue: Kaly Forest. She had long red hair with emerald green eyes. Although she had on the girl’s uniform she had a pair of black combat boots with black knee-high socks and a very long silver necklace that said Evil. Bitchy is more like it...
Personality: Well she's a bitch who is suprisingly nice to Tea... She's also a self-insert of the bitchy author.
Annoying Mary-Sue Qualities: She absorbs everyone's personality and makes them act like she wants them to.
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Actual Summary: How the school's toughest group got started. Members are Yami Marik, Yami Bakura and Seto Kaiba. Of Course all group needs a Queen.
My Summary: A Mary-Sue comes to Japan! Only it's not Japan because everyone acts American. Within the first, proper grammar less, chapter she has Yami Marik, Yami Bakura and Seto Kaiba bowing down to her. She also causes everyone to lose their personality... oh dear Kaiba voluntarily let someone borrow his car keys. Wait! Since when does he drive, he's only 16! (I know the rules are different in Japan but still!)
Mary-Sue: Kaly Forest. She had long red hair with emerald green eyes. Although she had on the girl’s uniform she had a pair of black combat boots with black knee-high socks and a very long silver necklace that said Evil. Bitchy is more like it...
Personality: Well she's a bitch who is suprisingly nice to Tea... She's also a self-insert of the bitchy author.
Annoying Mary-Sue Qualities: She absorbs everyone's personality and makes them act like she wants them to.
Lookie! People have reveiwed this story.