Fran's story archive - Being Harry Potter: Malfoy Watching

[dragon_charmer]

Here is another story originally posted on frances_potter which I'm archiving here. It is, of course, H/D and was, I think, my only try at writing first-person.

Originally posted May 2003.

Comments

[solarisday]

Oh, wow! The first person POV really works. The rendering of Harry's inner voice is almost poetical in tone. It has a certain cadence that gives story a musing quality.

The Draco/Pansy scene from Harry's perspective...excellent!

[star_dancer54]

Oh, gods. I hope, so very much, that there will be a sequel... *yearns* I want to see Draco's reaction... maybe even a retelling from his pov?

[primroseburrows]

I'm melting. Lovely.

[snottygrrl]

guh. am totally speechless. have always loved reading (and writing) in first person. i love to be inside someone's head.

this is truly lovely. innocent!draco, jaded!harry. i'd quote, but i'd have to quote the whole bloody thing.

you have to do the sex. please do the sex. i'm begging here. [*puppy dog eyes*]

thanks for reposting this. [*loves*] ♥

[__mintyfresh]

Mmm, one of my favorites. It's been so long since I've read it. I am so very glad you reposted it. It melts my heart so well.