Fic: Return

Sep 13, 2004 19:54

This is for olivia_lupin - one of the nicest people I have ever had the pleasure to know.

I miss you

R-rated. H/D. Unbeta-ed ... sorry about any mistakes. (Please do not archive this version.)
Fic: Return )

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chuffing September 15 2004, 00:07:20 UTC
Oh Fran, how do you make me feel so much with words? This was so tense and loving and sweet and sad all rolled into one. I love the future fics because they let me form ideas as to where Res may go. Oh, and you added more to my I Loathe Ron obsession. I simply adored this. Olivia will be thrilled. ♥

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kupukello September 15 2004, 00:47:11 UTC
Oh Fran! So lovely!!! I especially love this:

He knew Draco was watching him and it gave him a buzz that even after five years his lover still liked to just look -- the grey eyes would roam over him, and Harry would respond to the gaze ... moving a leg, or arching his shoulder. Sometimes ... well, most times Harry admitted to himself ... it would become more and more intimate until he knew Draco couldn’t resist any longer.

MMMMH!!!

That scene from Raiders of the Lost Ark is also one of my all time favourites, and I like seeing it re-written in Res universe *grin*

And um. I can see a pattern here, Harry, Tom Welling, Harrison Ford... You are not so much into blonds now, are you? *grin*

“Come one ... I want to have my wicked way with you.”

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dragon_charmer September 15 2004, 03:09:31 UTC
Thank you!
Corrected *grins*

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snottygrrl September 15 2004, 05:21:42 UTC
there is absolutley nothing better than to come home after a long day and find a fic from one of your favorite authors. [*swoon*]
it is so wonderful to have a future res fic, a little fix until you get res10 sorted. ironicaly enough i just read your two bday fics on restrictedsection.org last night, so i had a feeling that owl was from dad!
loved, loved, loved this. thanks heaps!
[*adores*]

Umbridge had made him cut over and over again into his skin ‘I must not tell lies’ in his own skin.

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zupackpiepton September 15 2004, 05:28:36 UTC
That was really great. It reminded me of Loris STNE. Is there going to be a sequel?

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milenalupin September 15 2004, 05:39:42 UTC
*sighs*

*glares at Lucius and BastardBoy*

*sharpens wand ready to stab*

... in other word - love it. Especially the cameo of THAT QUILL which is really one of the most evil toys JKR ever came up with.

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