FIC: Newts (NC-17)

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Title: Newts
Author: astolat
Prompt: #1
Summary: "I’m twenty-eight!" Harry said. "I’ve been an Auror for ten years! You want me to go back to Hogwarts now?"
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): CNTW but no warnings as far as I can tell.
Word Count: 13,760
Author's Notes: With many thanks to L & C for beta!

( Newts )

Comments

[lq_traintracks]

Wow, I really loved this!

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I like how subtle you were about blurring the Slytherin lines and how you didn't unveil where you were going with it too soon. You really trusted the reader, and I loved that!

But omg, thank goodness for Luna Lovegood's big mouth! :-DDDD I already loved the heated, bitter snarkiness between them, the fists-clenched animosity, but THEN, when those tables are turned and it becomes about Draco WANTING Harry... Omg, I LOVED how you got them together and how Draco stayed very much who he'd been before, just whilst ripping Harry's clothes off. ;-) He was luscious! And Harry! God, I loved how much he loved it!!! GUH!

This was bloody priceless right here:

“Put it in me again,” Harry said, faintly, and shut his eyes and braced himself, only Draco didn’t slam into him this time, just pushed slowly and luxuriously back into him and-and-stayed there, pushed deep, Harry’s whole sore body swollen tight around him and his thighs pushed apart, and Harry hadn’t known you could get this fucked, this completely fucked, until he’d spent five solid minutes just shuddering on Draco Malfoy’s cock.

Son of a holy hell yes!!!!

And omg sore shagging FTW!!!

Brilliant sexual tension, MA! And a nicely rounded out plot that lets them keep at it!



Thank you for a great start to DTH this year! <3