FIC: One More Time (Let's Do it Again) (R)

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Title: One More Time (Let's Do it Again)
Author: huldrejenta
Prompt Number: # 43
Summary: Draco preferred a life free from the unforeseen and the uncontrollable. Surely he could handle Potter, though, friends with benefits or not. But since when had anything involving Potter gone according to plan?
Rating: R
Warning(s): None
Word Count: 6,000
Author's Notes:

Comments

[capitu]

That was gorgeous. I love the way you wrote Draco and I love the way he felt about Harry. How surprising it was that they worked so well, how it felt to be something Harry wanted. How scary it was to know how much he wanted Harry.

The moments when they were together, they felt meaningful, undeniably so. Harry was wonderful, with his smile and laughs.

Potter laughed with his entire being. It started somewhere in the corners of his eyes and spread like an unstoppable force across his face, continuing through his body. There was no self-awareness about it, he remained utterly unguarded.

Beautiful. Draco really stood no chance. :) I loved it.

[huldrejenta]

Thank you so much for your wonderful comment! I'm so happy you enjoyed this <3 Your words put a huge smile on my face:)

[robinellen]

This is so sweet and gentle...I love how they fall into each other, how their friendship just naturally morphs into *more* -- because how else can they be? :)

[huldrejenta]

Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you felt that the transition from friends to something more was natural. Thanks for taking the time to comment :)

[lamerezouille]

This was such a nice read, and so beautifully written. I loved the way you wrote Draco and his internal turmoil. ♥

[huldrejenta]

Thank you! I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story, and the writing <3
Thanks for taking the time to comment :)

[birdsofshore]

Mmm, that was yummy. I loved Harry being so forward and taking charge even though Draco was the one topping. They were powerless to resist one another and it was very satisfying when they both shared their true feelings. Thank you, MA.

[huldrejenta]

'Yummy' is a description that I liked a lot, thank you so much! I'm really pleased you enjoyed this - thanks for commenting :)

[akira_tm]

That was so sweet ^o^
I like the way you wrote Draco's perspective ;-)

My favorite part :
Draco, of course, rolled his eyes. “What’s next on your list, Potter? Spin the Bottle?”

“What’s wrong with Spin the Bottle?” Potter looked alarmingly like someone who might very well suggest just that any moment.
That part made me smile. Thank you ^^

[huldrejenta]

Thank you, I'm so glad the story could make you smile :)
Thanks for taking the time to comment!