FIC: Record It As A Victory (R)

Apr 29, 2014 01:30

Title: Record It As A Victory
Author: lomonaaeren
Prompt: # 144
Summary: There are several people missing, and no answers. Only a vampire in a silver cage, and the questions he asks.
Rating: R
Warning(s): Some angst, creature!fic (Draco is a vampire), elements of D/s
Word Count: 13,000
Author's Notes: Many thanks to my beta L., without whom I could not have ( Read more... )

fic length: one shot, type: fic, fic length: medium, rating: r, [admin] fest-2014, genre: creature, author: lomonaaeren, creature: vampire, contains: d/s

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capitu April 28 2014, 20:58:27 UTC
I love the slow realisation that came as you told the story. For me it was, as if along with Harry I realised what was happening. The dreams confused me, but as Harry started to understand what Draco was doing, so did I, and that was so cool.

I love that Harry understood that he had the power.

"Because I don't want you to be," Harry said. "And what I want matters to you, or you wouldn't have done this in the first place."

Yeaaaah.

But then, "As long as you remember that you can ask for things," Draco said at last, "but I give the orders."

Oh yeah! :D

I really enjoyed that. Thank you!

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lomonaaeren May 10 2014, 17:30:53 UTC
Thank you! Glad the dreams worked; I couldn't have fully explained them early on without going into Draco's POV, and I wanted to stay in Harry's.

Harry wanted to surrender, but ensure that he had the ability to stop Draco at the same time. He never would have surrendered without that assurance.

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helenadax April 28 2014, 21:33:09 UTC
Great, I loved the way everything worked ^^ The way you described vampire!Draco was gorgeous.

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lomonaaeren May 10 2014, 17:31:03 UTC
Thank you! I did like writing this one.

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anonymous April 28 2014, 22:15:40 UTC
dracotops_mods April 28 2014, 22:22:15 UTC
Mod here: Seriously. Is this necessary? We will have a Guessing Poll up after the end of the fest. You can then tell everybody your guesses as to who wrote which fic.

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lamerezouille April 29 2014, 15:33:45 UTC
This fic had a lot of things I don't usually enjoy reading (creature!fic, d/s), but you made it work very well and wove a fascinating tale. I was completely pulled in and loved it! Great work! ♥

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lomonaaeren May 10 2014, 17:31:17 UTC
Thank you! I appreciate it.

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fantasyfiend09 April 29 2014, 21:09:58 UTC
I loved the suspense and mystery. The tension, both sexual and wondering about Harry safety/sanity, was thrilling. I loved what we learned about Draco and how Harry was so different from the others, both in his compliance and in his happiness with his life. Great read.

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lomonaaeren May 10 2014, 17:31:43 UTC
Thank you!

Draco might wish that Harry was a little different, a little more willing to come with him, but he's accepted that it would never work out that way. :)

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