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FEST: Don’t Stop It Before It Begins (R)

Apr 19, 2013 15:30

Title: Don’t Stop It Before It Begins
Author: elfearsonli
Prompt: # 99
Summary: “I don’t understand how this is of any concern to you, Malfoy,” Harry said, crossing his arms over his chest. Draco blinked at the use of his last name, something that Harry only used with him in jest these days. “I’m merely spending time with my Auror partner, who is from another ( Read more... )

fic length: long, fic length: one shot, type: fic, author: elfearsonli, era: post-war, rating: r, ewe, [admin] fest-2013

Comments 34

awickedmemory April 19 2013, 16:15:38 UTC

God, Draco, for someone so smart you're so clueless sometimes. :D Loved this, it was adorable, and I loved Draco's seething jealousy~ ♥ You did a great job of making me violently hate Jackson despite him doing nothing wrong - he'd enter the scene and my stomach would churn. Lovely work, and welcome to writing Drarry! Beautifully done, excellent characterizations, great fun to read!

mischieviolet May 9 2013, 13:10:30 UTC

Thank you so much for your kind review! I'm so happy you enjoyed it - I truly agonised over trying to make this perfect and the characters believable, and your review means a lot! :)

awickedmemory May 23 2013, 16:03:36 UTC

Oh my gosh, but agony aside, you definitely succeeded - your characterizations were brilliant, love! ♥

tryslora April 19 2013, 16:29:49 UTC

Awwww. I loved getting to see oblivious Draco. And Pansy. Love her!!

mischieviolet May 9 2013, 13:11:23 UTC

I also love oblivious Draco! Thanks for reading! :)

0idontknow0 April 19 2013, 17:31:32 UTC

Drunk!Draco. So much head shaking on my part. Oh gosh.

And I have to say, Draco trying to win Harry, he had to do it in a way that even if Harry had turned him down Jackson would have seen them looking so intimate that he might not have wanted to deal with being Harry's second.

This was really enjoyable. Draco was so oblivious it was painful and then the inner turmoil after the kiss was perfect, for both of them. And Hermione and Pansy are lovely people, I must say. I thoroughly enjoyed this.

mischieviolet May 9 2013, 13:14:21 UTC

Thank you so much for the awesome review! I was stressing a little over drunk! And oblivious!Draco, so I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!

cottonrobin April 19 2013, 18:14:34 UTC

OMG I loved this! Poor Draco and his obliviousness and poor Harry for having to put up with Draco. I'm so glad Draco finally realized and worked it out in the end. This was a really enjoyable read. Thanks so much for picking the prompt and writing this amazing story!

mischieviolet May 9 2013, 13:16:12 UTC

Eee, so glad you liked it! Your prompt was the kind of story that I personally love, so I thought what the hell- I'll give it a go and I'm so glad I did, I had a blast writing it - and am happy to see I didn't bollocks it up! Thanks for reading!

l_niania April 19 2013, 18:51:29 UTC

This is brilliant! You kept them on the edge for soooooo long. And still it was believable and captivating the whole time. Also, very well written. I really loved this story! \o/

mischieviolet May 9 2013, 13:17:37 UTC

Oh, I'm so glad you liked it! I was really pulling my hair out at keeping them on edge for so long and worried it was too much, but your kind words have put me at ease. Thanks for reading!!