Comments | dracotops_harry: FIC: Dawn (NC-17)

dracotops_mods in dracotops_harry

FIC: Dawn (NC-17)

Apr 05, 2013 21:23

Title: Dawn
Author: kedavranox
Prompt: # 151
Summary: The Aurors tend to assume that someone broke in That Night, and Harry doesn't want to make them think otherwise. He doesn’t want them to know that it wasn’t a break in at all. That it was Harry’s fault... that he let it happen.
Rating: NC-17
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco
Warning(s): (highlight for details) ( Read more... )

kink: bottoming-from-the-top, fic length: long, fic length: one shot, type: fic, contains: non-con, author: kedavranox, contains: drugging, rating: nc-17, [admin] fest-2013

Comments 94

drarryisgreen April 5 2013, 14:53:22 UTC

I liked it a lot!

kedavranox May 4 2013, 02:03:33 UTC

Thank you! <3

mab April 5 2013, 15:08:32 UTC

You already know I love this fic, but now I'm going to leave you public love for it!

It's heart-wrenching and raw. I adore how you deal with the very real emotions and reactions to trauma that the characters have to face. Harry is perfectly charaterised in not wanting other people to do things for him, not wanting to burden other people with his problems, even to the point where he is clueless about how much damage he's doing to others by not being entirely honest. That is the thing about secrets. :/

I freaking love your Draco in this. He's hot and macho, but still the same snarky Slytherin I've come to love. I enjoy how much he's grown over the years, how he's matured and the sexual tension between him and Harry is so thick, I just want to bite it!

The sex! Whoa!! Brilliant. Gives me goosebumps and flushes at the same time.

Excellent work with this one, my dear!!!

kedavranox May 4 2013, 02:05:19 UTC

Thank you, Mab. I love all the support you give! ❤

robinellen April 5 2013, 15:34:25 UTC

Wow, poor Harry. He's so determined to fight through on his own...but I love how Draco is also determined to stick with him. I so hope they can work through this!

kedavranox May 4 2013, 02:05:47 UTC

I like to think they will. Thanks for reading! ❤

evening12 April 5 2013, 16:39:11 UTC

I really don't have enough words to express how much I loved this story. I love how real it felt. You didn't gloss over anything and you made Harry and those around him deal with the events it a way that rang true to their character. Thank you for writing this :D

kedavranox May 4 2013, 02:06:39 UTC

Than you for reading and commenting! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. I tried not to skip over the hard parts, so I'm glad that worked out well.

unbroken_halo April 5 2013, 16:57:46 UTC

Simply stunning. I was a bit leery about reading because of the noncon but you handled it delicately. I also really appreciated the aftermath was handled with just as much decency and grace. I am ever so glad that the idea grew on you so much.

That said, I loved the little details you changed from canon and how Harry wasn't quite oblivious but tended to ignore what he didn't want to see. I'm not going to spoil it here by leaving the other details I truly enjoyed but it was well worth putting aside my hesitations to read this fic. Extremely well done, MA! Thank you for sharing.

kedavranox May 4 2013, 02:07:40 UTC

Thank you! ❤

I'm glad you braved the warning and read on anyway, and that you took the time to comment. That means a lot. :)