FIC: Grayscale (PG-13)

Apr 18, 2012 05:30

Title: Grayscale
Author: cariceus
Prompt: # 66
Summary: Draco keeps to himself and doesn't talk. This hasn't been a problem for him in school so far, until for some reason he catches the attention of Harry Potter. Then life takes a (pleasant) turn.
Rating: PG-13
Pairing(s): Draco/Harry (obviously), mentions of Blaise/Pansy and Ron/Hermione
Warnings: None ( Read more... )

fic length: one shot, author: cariceus, type: fic, fic length: medium, [admin] fest-2012, genre: fluff, rating: pg-13

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badcook April 18 2012, 13:39:39 UTC
My reaction when I saw this: O.O
And then it became this: =D

It was great! Harry is so stubbornly cute and Draco is plenty patient to have tolerated Harry's persistence, teehee. I was kinda expecting Draco to talk in the end, but it's still great that they did end up sappily together. :D Though it's kinda sad that Harry still can't do Leglimency, it's lovely that Draco writes his responses on parchment; like writing love letters to Harry every single day. <3

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cariceus May 4 2012, 23:50:29 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) When I'd been writing it, I wasn't sure how it was going to end, either, but I guess I thought that having Draco talk at the end would have been a little too perfect, or something? Haha ^^; And aww, yes, like love letters, a concrete reminder that they're always together :D ♥

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evening12 April 18 2012, 14:22:58 UTC
Hehehe. This story was adorably cute with the right touch of funny.
"I thought I could scare you into talking," Potter continued. "Because - well - I dunno, it just made sense in my head." I laughed so much when I read this line...my favourite one in the entire story.

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cariceus May 4 2012, 23:51:10 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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fantasyfiend09 April 18 2012, 16:01:38 UTC
I'm always nervous with AU, but this was very cute. I love your bumbling!Harry and all of his attempts to get Draco to talk. The thought of Lucius getting Harry's letter had me laughing. Hee hee

I like the sweet ending and the fact that it's all still new (and Harry still can't do Leglimency and Draco still won't talk). It hints at how much they have yet to do/work on. But they seem to be doing pretty well with just a quill. <3

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cariceus May 4 2012, 23:52:35 UTC
Thank you! I rarely write Harry Potter AU (actually, I think this is my first time xD) so I'm glad you thought it turned out well :D And I'd really have loved writing Harry sending the letter to Lucius, too :D

Yeah, Draco and Harry are getting to know each other. But that's always the sweetest, isn't it? :3

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thrilladdict April 18 2012, 17:34:35 UTC
This was very good! I specially liked how cute Harry was :D

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cariceus May 4 2012, 23:52:52 UTC
Thank you so much! Harry is an adorable cupcake ♥ ^^

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shameful_desire April 18 2012, 19:41:30 UTC
Very cute. :)

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cariceus May 4 2012, 23:53:03 UTC
Thank you :D

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