FIC: Normal is the Watchword (PG-13)

Apr 08, 2012 22:24

Posting late because the mod was out on a very long Easter brunch. Happy Spring holiday to everyone! ♥

Title: Normal Is the Watchword
Author: lamerezouille
Prompt: # 38
Summary: This story is about love and family and yes, maybe it’s not supposed to be about Jamie exactly, but Draco and Harry are very stubborn and Jamie’s just a kid, you can’t expect him to ( Read more... )

fic length: long, genre: mpreg, author: lamerezouille, [admin] fest-2012, rating: pg-13

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lamerezouille May 5 2012, 07:46:45 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm really glad the person it was destined to liked it so much!

I'm happy you liked Jamie's PoV, I really was throwing the poor kid into the unknown.

I love how we can see bits of Harry, and bits of Draco in him as well and he's also, very much so, his own person.
This is really what I was aiming for! Thank you so much!

:D

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mezzo_cammin April 8 2012, 22:35:21 UTC
I really, really enjoyed this story! What a refreshing point-of-view character! I was rooting for him (and them) all the way!

Lovely story, with just the right touches of angst and humor! \o/

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lamerezouille May 5 2012, 07:50:25 UTC
Thank you very much!

I'm glad the angst and humour worked well, as it was certainly a challenge for me.

:D

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evening12 April 8 2012, 23:57:00 UTC
And I was looking forward to being the first person to comment :P First one dear anonymous, you have nothing to worry about this story is absolutely lovely. You took a great prompt that could have been written as an okay story and made it into an interesting story. The style of written was as mezzo_cammin mentioned, simply refreshing.

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lamerezouille May 5 2012, 07:52:21 UTC
Thank you very much for your kind comment!

You took a great prompt that could have been written as an okay story and made it into an interesting story.
That's such a great compliment! Thank you!

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titaniumse April 9 2012, 00:13:50 UTC
Wow, I really liked this! As mentioned in the comments above, the POV works really well, and you have a way of writing that makes me really feel for the boys and Jamie. My heart was breaking a little when I thought they were never getting their happy ending.

I will definitly check out your other stories after the reveals, so prepare for some internet-stalking dear author *grins*

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lamerezouille May 5 2012, 07:54:56 UTC
Thank you so much!

I'm glad the PoV worked for you and that I managed to communicate all the feelings I wanted to!

:D

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sisi_rambles April 9 2012, 01:16:09 UTC
Jamie is such a lovely character!

No, his approach had to be way more upfront...'How would you feel about getting back together with my dad?' *snort* Yeah, not much Slytherin sneakiness there :D

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lamerezouille May 5 2012, 07:57:53 UTC
Thank you very much!

I developed so much love for Jamie writing him, I'm glad other people did too!

He definitely doesn't have Slytherin sneakiness, but he did manage to get what he wanted in the end, didn't he? ;)

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