FEST FIC: Up Jumped the Devil

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We are posting two shorter stories today. Do enjoy! ♥

Title: Up Jumped the Devil
Author: mijeli
Prompt: #34 submitted by reikokatsura
Summary: The chase goes on, no matter who is running.
Rating: R
Pairing(s): Draco/Harry
Warnings: Rough lovemaking. Severe lack of redemption.
Word Count: ~ 1,600
Author's Notes: Dear reikokatsura, this might not be what you expected, and I hope

Comments

[talekayler]

Wow. This one really grabbed me in, and I want to read more! I love the second scene, where Harry just knows that Draco is standing there, Disillusioned.

[mijeli]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[mothlights]

Love the chase. You've really got the feel of it here. Great lines like "A rat could come, or a cat chasing it - anything to distract. But the alley remains deadly silent and Draco feels a sweat break out upon his brow and in his armpits." keep the tension high. Very nice!

[mijeli]

I'm very glad you felt the tension! That's wonderful feedback. Thank you for the comment!

[mijeli]

It really thrills me that you noticed the visuals most of all :) Thanks so much for this lovely feedback!

[lijahlover]

Oh this was brilliant I loved the dark atmosphere. The chase was intense and so desperate.

[mijeli]

Wow - those are all things I tried to achieve :) Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[elainemalfoy]

This is brilliant and hot! I love unredeemed!Draco and the fact that Harry can't resist him ;)
So beautifully written too...Amazing!!

[mijeli]

Hee, me too x)
Thank you so much! I'm very glad you enjoyed it.