The Hand of Wrath, chapter 7 [PG-13, seaQuest, Bridger/Westphalen, WIP]

[dracosdreamer]

the newest chapter is finally up! so sorry for the delay....first came NaNo, as you know--and then writers' block, and then the new semester has been very busy!

enjoy!

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[dracosdreamer]

thanks :D i had a feeling you'd like Ben's showing up to talk to Lucas :) he will have one more scene near the end for certain.

all i will tell you for now is that it will be in the last couple chapters ;) Katie might have another cameo at some point but i'm still trying to figure out if it is workable. (and i realized awhile ago that we haven't seen Miguel at ALL--oops lol. i got an idea tho to have him show up...just gotta figure out if it fits.)

[chaoticprose]

Ooo, very cool! I loved seeing what happened to Stark and Nathan's reaction to the near-drowning video. It's interesting to see what goes through Len's head. I loved Bridger's interrogation of Charli and the scene with Ben and Lucas. :)

[sio]

(i really should change my alerts for this journal to come through my main email addy :P)

glad you liked the flashback with Stark! i will be honest and say i didn't come up with that part as i mentioned in the author notes :) i just took Cam's bit that she gave me, worked with it (she wrote the original draft of the first three paragraphs) and finished it off.

the Lucas/Ben scene is my favorite of this chapter, i think.