Bleach - After the Fall - Part One

Aug 10, 2010 22:27

Feeling a little down from work I decided the best way to cheer myself up was to post a new fic. So today, I bring to you a new Bleach fanfiction.

*pouts* I really need a Stark icon.

Enjoy!

Title: After the Fall
Characters: Ukitake/Stark, Shunsui, Unohana (in spirit), Byakuya
Rating: T to M
Warning: SPOILERS like whoah, future slashiness
Words: 13,223 ( Read more... )

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nmhotel21 August 11 2010, 03:42:34 UTC
This is lovely, Stark and Ukitake bonding over losing parts of their souls, although I do hope Shunsui wakes up, is very touching. Stark's characterization is also rather excellent. Shinji as Stark's captain equals win, it's so very amusing. I can't wait for more.

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dracoqueen22 August 11 2010, 04:17:36 UTC
Thanks! Characterization is always of the utmost importance to me so thank you for commenting on it. I've already got this written, so it's just a matter of getting it formatted and ready for public consumption. Thanks for reading!

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dracoqueen22 August 11 2010, 04:20:19 UTC
Thanks! I'm super-proud of the way the tone turned out in this one so I'm glad to see it was worth the wait.

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gokuma August 11 2010, 08:40:22 UTC
It was awesome, I can't wait to see the next part (although I can't stand the thought of Shunsui being dead... or about dead Ukitake *glares at Kubo*)

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dracoqueen22 August 11 2010, 14:48:58 UTC
Yeah. I'm not too impressed with Kubo as of late either but that's a rant I won't get into. *laughs*

Glad you liked! There are actually two more parts as I, for some reason, can't count.

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pony_rocks August 11 2010, 09:13:03 UTC
That was beautiful.♥

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dracoqueen22 August 11 2010, 14:49:10 UTC
Thanks!

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theablackthorn August 11 2010, 12:30:29 UTC
I can't wait to read the rest. My heart is somewhere in the vicinity of my throat right now.

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dracoqueen22 August 11 2010, 14:56:27 UTC
Thanks! That's kind of where my heart was the whole time I was writing it. I had been gripped by this TONE -- which I think is the best way to describe it -- which made for a very interesting idea. *grins*

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theablackthorn August 11 2010, 15:03:41 UTC
It's a very good way to describe it. I have had thpose moments and this fic fit's in that tone perfectly. Melancholic, yet hopeful.

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