Flash Fiction Fills Take 60

May 23, 2015 11:54

a/n: Good afternoon! Here be all the flash fiction that aren't either a) part of a series or b) long enough to stand on their own. :) Enjoy! Oh, and these are self-edited. Beware the errant commas.

For nkfloofiepoof
Prompt: anything with the cassettes, author's choice went for Frenzy, Rumble, and threw in Bumblebee

But... if Rumble ate it then Bumblebee couldn't and that... that would probably be a tragedy. )

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anonymous May 28 2015, 00:09:12 UTC
To do a more serious review here, I'll say this: Skyfire's last words to Megatron were quite apt. Because really, he wasn't either. He joined one side based on a lie, and then jumped to the other only to find it didn't fit him either. He was a mech pulled out of his own time, and he didn't have the mindset the others did.

Which makes him, in his own way, unpredictable.

They all made assumptions concerning him and failed to see that they didn't know him at all. There is a warning concerning the quiet ones, that you don't know what they're capable of. Apparently, neither faction ever heard of that saying. I almost pity the next mechs in line should Skyfire find them. Almost.

[i]Hesitation was the Autobots' downfall.

Pride was the weakness of the Decepticons.

Skyfire had neither.[/i]

Well put.

Again, I don't think this needs a follow-up, whether you or someone else writes it, as I find this perfect. While I admittedly can't stop someone else from doing it, should they so choose, I don't think anything could top this. I am soooo saving this little flashfic, if you don't mind, dracoqueen.

Skywinder/Starfire201

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dracoqueen22 May 28 2015, 00:30:52 UTC
Thank you! As I was debating with myself what I was going to do with this promt and this idea came to mind, I had to reason for myself why it wouldn't be OOC and then I realized, 1) Skyfire's not given much characterization as it is and 2) this war is not his. It never was. Why wouldn't he be tired of seeing the back-and-forth shuffle of it? And the rest just flowed. :)

I don't mind at all! Feel free to save it. ^_^

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anonymous May 28 2015, 22:24:51 UTC
*grins*
G1 never really did. Gave some clues, but never really expanded on them. And then people just went the doormat route, which I didn't care for much. So I don't write him like that, and I like it when I see an author explore his character further. ^^

It flowed quite well. ^^

Thank you!

Skywinder/Starfire201

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