SG1 fic

[draco_somnians]

So apparently, I like to kick Jack's ass. I may have to go write him some porn to make up for this.

Title: Five times Nine Times Jack O’Neill Broke A Bone.
Category: er...whump? Is that a category? Gen.
Episode Related: Solitudes mainly, but also any that reference Jack’s life before the SGC.
Season: One and pre-season one.
Pairing: Jack/Sara, but

Comments

[dieastra]

Oh how beautiful! Solitudes fic! There is nothing better than Solitudes fic! Seriously, this episode has to be the best whumping ever. It's no coincidence that I wrote my first story ever about this one.

But your story really tops it all. I never actually thought about how he might have gotten all the broken bones. Starting with his childhood was a surprise - but very fitting (even more fitting when I remember all the things I read about RDA himself ;) )

The one in the desert touched me most. Such desperation.

LOL at lolmac's comment - somehow it is really hard to imagine a time without all the things we know today, yes? I'm just back from a concert, where they told about when they grew up in the eigthies - and nobody carried a phone with him in the pocket. No, the phones were connected to the wall, and you had to put your finger into the wheel and turn it - and you had to remember the number in your head! LOL The little kids looked as if they didn't believe it.

Anyway, great story - I'll keep that one! Thanks! (as for the other stories, making may way back from the top)

[draco_somnians]

I adore Solitudes, it's one of my faves. :)

I never actually thought about how he might have gotten all the broken bones. - Heh, I guess my mind is just twisted like that! *g*

The one in the desert touched me most. Such desperation. - Wow, that was the part I found hardest to write. I'm glad the desperation came through. :)

No, the phones were connected to the wall, and you had to put your finger into the wheel and turn it - and you had to remember the number in your head! LOL The little kids looked as if they didn't believe it. - LMAO!! Kids today huh? *g*

Thank you so much for the great feedback. :)

[dieastra]

Wanna see my try on the topic?

http://www.jackfic.net/archive/archive/40/cold.html

I'm going to post it on my LJ one day, then you can comment there, if you want to. Actually, this is even the second story (but the first one I posted). The really first one was only the dialogue from the episode, with written thoughts and feelings in between.

This episode made me a writer, because I wanted to explore what Jack was really thinking while trying to convice Sam that they would make it. And that RDA has surely cracked some ribs already in his life helps him to play it so perfectly. The viewer is hurting together with him.

If I don't stop soon I'm writing a review into here ;)

[draco_somnians]

Awwwwwww. Very sweet. :)