Theme 11: Appearance

Apr 11, 2011 00:32

Today's theme:
Appearance 1. Submit your drabble that fits this theme as a comment to this post. It should be between 100-300 words, if you go over/under a bit that's fine! If it's longer than say 400 words, I ask that you post on your journal or fanfiction.net and then submit the link to this post. If you find that your story is going to be very ( Read more... )

theme 11: appearance

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rattyjol April 11 2011, 23:24:39 UTC
Fandom: Animorphs
Claim: fandom
Rating: PG
Drabbles completed so far: 5/100 ( ... )

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failegaidin April 12 2011, 16:36:02 UTC
Fandom: Stargate: Atlantis
Claim: John/Elizabeth
Rating: PG
Drabbles completed so far: 10/100
A/N: Set during The Return, Pt.1 ( ... )

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slashedsilver April 13 2011, 10:42:16 UTC
Fandom: Sungkyunkwan Scandal
Claim: Moon Jae Shin/Goo Yong Ha
Rating: PG-13
Drabbles completed so far: 6/100

"I don't see why I'm the one who has to dress like a girl." Yong Ha's voice is plaintive. "Why not pick Yoon Hee? Who actually is a girl, if no one else has noticed."

Jae Shin swallows a sharp retort -- they've already been through this more than ten times, but as usual, Yong Ha likes to make his complaints heard, particularly when it concerns his outward appearance.

Sun Joon is the one who politely, if a little absently, repeats the explanation, as he loops the goreum neatly and fastens it in place. Jae Shin thinks Sun Joon is a little too experienced at the manoeuver. "Senior, you know it would be too dangerous for Yoon Hee to be the one to lure the rapist out. What if we should lose sight of her? It would be too late if anything should happen ( ... )

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j_gabrielle April 23 2011, 08:51:20 UTC
This is brilliant and I love it! Please continue? It deserves a sequel and I can't wait to see how it all unfolds.

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slashedsilver April 24 2011, 17:26:08 UTC
Oh I'm glad you liked it! I wasn't really sure if anyone was reading my drabbles, because it's quite an obscure fandom, but I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'd started working on continuing the fic some time back, but your comment was what really made me finish it. Because I was struggling with thoughts of whether I would ruin it if I continued it, since everyone seemed to like it as it was. You can find the updated version on the same page :) I think I'll still want to work on it because I'm not sure how I feel about it. But I'm welcoming your feedback!

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j_gabrielle April 25 2011, 00:11:14 UTC
This was the first thing I saw in my inbox this morning and it's such a lovely thing to wake up to. I had actually another comment all mapped out in my head with the gist of it begging you to continue, when I saw the mention of a new chapter.

Right now I could love you and feed you with cakes and cookies and chocolate bunnies ♥ Even if you get impossibly spherical, I would still love you and roll you to the toilet if need be.. ^^ I'm glad my comment got you to finish the continuation. I just read it, and after a little spazz session over how pretty Song Joong Ki would look in women's clothes, I have to flail all over again. Especially at that last line, and the part where Yongha feels abandoned? But the last line was a KO. Awesomeness divine.

I think I should end this now before it gets too flail-y and riding on too much spazz. *_*

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ac_123 April 13 2011, 12:58:04 UTC
Fandom: Original
Claim: Lady
Rating: G
Drabbles completed so far: 8/100

Her first hurnyr is more painful than she could possibly describe. So painful, in fact, that it’s just a big, black blank in her memory. So numbing that she forgets what she used to look like and since Condie is paranoid as all fuck (“I’m sorry captain, I can’t risk you going insane.”), Lady grills Laz for information.

“Well…” he says, “you were shorter. Like, uh, five feet? Just under?” He scratches his cheek. “You were blond. It wasn’t really curly or straight. It was kinda just there. And…uh…blue eyes.” His face softens. “You still have those. But they were smaller back then.”

Lady grabs a fistful of hair and looks at it: dark brown nearly black and wavy, uncontrolled.

“Is anything else going to change?”

Lady looks up at Laz. His concern is painfully scratched into his face.

She shrugs and crawls into his arms. In her new, deeper voice, one traced with droll sarcasm rather than her old abundant joy, she says, “We’ll have to wait and see

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mihnn April 13 2011, 13:19:32 UTC
Fandom: Harry Potter
Claim: Harry Potter
Rating: PG
Drabbles completed so far: 9/100

What Comes After (part IX)

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