Comments | dpracket: Dallas, reimagined 3/4

dpracket

Dallas, reimagined 3/4

Mar 01, 2013 10:54

As soon as the darkness enveloped them, Luke started talking ( Read more... )

luke reid atwt, author:artist dpracket

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ltklo March 20 2013, 19:50:13 UTC

I love that first section. It's very raw and honest.

No games. Love the chapter.

dpracket April 3 2013, 15:14:13 UTC

Thank you. Sorry for my tardiness in responding. :)

scotianova March 20 2013, 20:57:12 UTC

He then hooked his chin over Luke's shoulder and looked at him in the mirror.

I see Reid doing that and just melt away!
Wonderful!

dpracket April 3 2013, 15:14:26 UTC

:)

Thank you. Sorry for my tardiness in responding. :)

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dpracket April 3 2013, 15:15:01 UTC

Yay for scruffiness. :)

Thank you. Sorry for my tardiness in responding. :)

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dpracket April 3 2013, 19:36:26 UTC

It's been hard lately to get online for long. I know that I still haven't commented on your latest pirate ("argh!") chapter, but I loved it. I read it on my phone, and I'm like keyboard-stupid on that thing...all thumbs. I don't like commenting on there. I want to go back and read the couple of chapters before it because I had forgotten some details.

justfun2412 March 20 2013, 21:33:24 UTC

I went back and read the first 2 chapters again and this is flowing so well.. I can't wait to see what the final chapter will be like.

dpracket April 3 2013, 15:15:36 UTC

Well, the next chapter ended up not being the end...lol. I just posted it.

Thank you. Sorry for my tardiness in responding. :)

amyafa March 20 2013, 21:34:35 UTC

I saw that you posted and that gave me a big smile.
I loved this chapter. Glad that they already are so comfortable with each other.

I am looking forward to read where you are taking us with the cliffhanger.

dpracket April 3 2013, 15:16:08 UTC

Next chapter is up.

Thank you. Sorry for my tardiness in responding. :)