five scenes that didn't involve kissing but now do (1/5)

[dpracket]

Pizza Day

"I thought we were starting something together," Reid said, slightly exasperated.

"Who knows what you think?" Luke retorted, rocking back and forth on his heels.  "Because one minute you're this pompous ass, and the next minute you're kissing me and making me feel like...like..."

"Feel like what?

"I don't know," Luke answered, dropping his

Comments

[nancygrew]

I had loved this scene on the show and hadn't minded the doc-blocking as it built up the anticipation even more. But after reading this, I much prefer the scene with the kissing. Nice job.

[dpracket]

I didn't mind the doc blocking/sexual tension/anticipation at first either, but then it got out of control, and in the end there was no dang payoff. Grrrr. Lol.

Thanks for reiding. :)

[slayerkitty]

Eeeep!

WHY COULDN'T THIS HAVE HAPPENED? :)

The scene, and kiss while Noah was in the coma are what made me fall in love with LuRE.

*hugs fic and you*

[dpracket]

Thank you. This was fun and quick/easy to write. Part two is already done. Easy peasy stuff...I guess since the scene is already written for me...lol...

[slayerkitty]

There is that! It's easier to work with the stuff the show gives us than to come up with the dialogue some times. :)

Please tell me you haven't given up on "This Could Get Messy" - I need to know how it ends! :)

[dpracket]

No, I haven't given up...I've just hit a mental wall with it.

There will be an update to it in the next few days.

[erikssiren]

This is how it should have happened! Amazing job.

[dpracket]

Thank you.

[im_with_him84]

I liked Lure, but after pizza day and the almost kisses, I was in LOVE!
So much chemistry between the two! But yes, it would've been better had they not been interrupted. Love this!

[dpracket]

Thank you. I agree, buckets of chemistry. Truck loads.

[dpracket]

Thanks.

Yeah, they had sexual tension off the charts.

Usually there's a payoff though... *sigh*

Thanks for reading and commenting.