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Mayton - Chapter One - UNBEARABLE

May 25, 2009 19:23

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cavilez May 25 2009, 08:19:07 UTC

OOOOOhh Yay. I really LOVE this. It's very interesting. The poor brothers, that must be hard to have to deal with bullying.

I can't wait to see what happens next. :D

petchy_14 May 25 2009, 09:13:59 UTC

OOooooOoO, Different :D

I can't wait until the story progresses and we have more understanding :) Very cool start!!!11onz

xbeccyx May 25 2009, 10:36:56 UTC

I'm already loving this! It's so awesome! :D
Aww, poor Baylon and Jackson! Dealing with bullying is terrifying.

I so can't wait for the next chapter! :D *Lurks f-list*

professoralenic May 25 2009, 14:14:58 UTC

WOW. This is really great, srsly. I really liked the kid's insults, they made me lol. And "What the fuck! Another freaky vision..." made me laugh, too. Thanks for that! Keep doing what you do best- making this story. :)

malafice May 25 2009, 18:34:44 UTC

Aww, the poor kids. This is pretty interesting Dozo and wasn't really expected. I can't wait to see the next part to it. =)