inhale, exhale. ; onew x key x ot5 ; pg-13

Aug 14, 2010 21:47

"inhale, exhale.
one-shot / onew x key x ot5 / pg 13 / 1335 words

→ jinki waits, waits, waits for kibum to come while he counts the limitless drops on his window pane, counts the beats of his high heart.

he breathed, inhaled as deep as he can, feeling the rush, feeling the beats of his heart rise quickly out of his chest, erasing thoughts that would distract him from the next minutes to come, from him. )

r: pg-13, wc: 1001-2000, f: shinee, g: general, p:onew/jonghyun, p: onew/key, p:onew/minho, p: onew/taemin

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rikli August 14 2010, 14:33:35 UTC
b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l

"eight hundred," kibum whispered, lips moving slowly and breath enticing jinki. "eight hundred, fifty one raindrops on that glass pane," he continued, now conspicuously eyeing his flawless face. jinki saw his own reflection in his eyes, burning eyes that he knew wanted him as well.

<3

it felt like reading a poem

glad ur back, i rly hope to read more of ur works now :)

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doyouknowwhy August 15 2010, 07:38:05 UTC
no, you're beautiful. 8D
i'm happy and might as well say i'm excited to be back. ♥

i hope you would be there when i continue writing. thank you for the wonderful comment, bb!

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rikli August 15 2010, 10:24:33 UTC
ohh <3 for sure, i will stalk you from now on then :D

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doyouknowwhy August 15 2010, 13:29:48 UTC
; ~; you're all so kind. waylt? thank you, thank you, thank you! /tacklehugs.

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rikli August 15 2010, 18:47:20 UTC
kind people should receive kindness or sth like that ^^
and just why not!? :D
/hugs

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